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Birthmarks- An Evidence of Reincarnation

I fully remember my earlier life completely as a man People of my village used to call me Phony Who was killed with a shot gun fired at close range. The reason was I made a pretty girl pregnant. There’s a party with masks and horrid dresses A girl extended her hand, took a walk on a lake Saw an old house not lived in for many years. We had it all the house, nothing could stop us. After a few months, whispers went around about An unmarried girl with round tummy gifted with a child But I could detect her because of a mole on her upper lip. Before I could see her, some people shot me dead. I still bear array of birthmarks tallying a gunshot blasts. I often visit the village in this life and often see the woman With the mole and her son exactly a carbon copy of Phony. +++++++ June 26, 2014 Form : Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta Fourth Place Win Contest: Past lives by Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 7/2/2014 11:38:00 PM
A very interesting story that you have told here, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win with this great write!
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Date: 6/29/2014 10:50:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Dr.Ram!!
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:48:00 PM
I knew this was a winner, Dr. Ram. Many congrats. Your friend in poetry, Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:39:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win my friend. Enjoyed the tale....
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:35:00 PM
Dr. Ram, Congrats for past life description and fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Dr. Mehta! hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 4:41:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram, congratulations on another well-deserved win! This is such a clever write that I enjoyed reading it immensely. Pandita.
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Date: 6/27/2014 9:09:00 PM
Nice Dr. Ram on reincarnation. GL in the contest. Enjoyed
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Date: 6/27/2014 8:22:00 AM
Is this phony baloney, or is this real? Please forgive the little fun I'm having with the words. A VERY intriguing write Doc.
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Date: 6/26/2014 11:14:00 AM
Wow!!!! This is an amazing story!!! Thank you for sharing, Dr. Ram. And thank you for your kind comments on my poem, 'A Love Affair'. bfn Elaine
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