Birthday Miles

birthday miles
summon us
with aging

wrinkles come
as do smiles
and trials

so many
memories
sweet recall

NB: Other form – Tricube: 3x3x3, 3 syllables per line, 3 stanzas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:37 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Linda -
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Many thanks dear Anne-Lise! :)
Bose Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 5:08 AM
"birthday miles" ... my shoes are worn out I've walked so far. But, with every yard and mile I pluck up a memory so do have a smile. (Don't know about that wrinkle thing, though.) Thanks, Linda, I enjoy it!
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Thanks David. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Yes, it is the miles, not the years that yield the deepest memories. Maybe walk barefoot, to save those shoes! LOL :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 5:04 AM
As we get older, life gets harder, and each year makes us wonder about the upcoming year more so than in youth. Won't be long before my 8th decade. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Hi Sara. Thanks for the fun contest and my placement. :)
Miller Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 2:08 AM
Oh, this is wonderful; so glad I stopped by to read it
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Thank you for stopping by Terry, and for the nice comment. :)
Alex Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 9:30 PM
Great truth. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Many thanks to you! :)
Kaur Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 9:03 AM
The sweet recall of memories comes from both smiles and trials...that's so true. Congratulations on your win!
Fowler Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Many thanks Harpreet! :)
George Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 11:23 PM
Beautiful memories are our sweetest treasures when we age. Well done Linda. All the Best in the contest.
Fowler Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 6:20 AM
I agree Valsa. I always appreciate your visits and warm comments. :)
Poteet Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Linda, I love the rhyme myself although tricubes dot no use rhyme. I thank God for the memories that unfortunately some people lose over time.
Fowler Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 4:38 PM
Yeah, well. Sometimes it just happens. :) Memories are some of my best friends. Thanks for commenting Reason. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:50 AM
We age but memories remain. Lovely Tricube poem. Best for a win.
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Thank you dear Victor. :)
Faulkner Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Birthdays bring so many memories, this is so sweetly joyful~
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Thank you Michelle. I appreciate your words. :)
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 1:00 PM
- I went for a birthday too... this one is wonderful... best wishes in the contest, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 2:25 PM
I like your 'Hurray' much better than this.:) Thanks Anne-Lise hugs!
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