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It was her birthday back in 'ninety-nine... our married daughter, thirty-eight years old. Her husband planned a party at their home. Above the table, floated blue balloons. Out came the lovely birthday cake dessert. Her husband held it up for us to see, while daughter glanced around so mystified. As we approved her pretty cake, she cried, "Please, someone read the words on that darn cake!" Presumed, was 'Happy Birthday' written there. Oh! 'Lynn's Having A Baby' instead, it said! That joyous memory with us will stay. So long they'd waited for a child to come; our precious, now sixteen years old, grandson. Sandra M. Haight ~4th Place~ Contest: A Special Secret Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Judged: 12/13/2017 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Combination of Three Words Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 01/03/2016 Required Words: Dessert, Memory, Balloons -------------------------------------------- True Story...See Real Cake Above

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Date: 12/18/2017 9:15:00 AM
What a great poem Sandra and congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2017 9:36:00 PM
Sweet story, Sandra! Congrats! Janice
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/13/2016 12:00:00 PM
Thank you once again, Hansteven, for your nice visits and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 1/10/2016 11:01:00 PM
Wel done, Sandra... take care. Love LINDA
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/13/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/6/2016 3:18:00 PM
AHH!!!! CONGRATS ON THE WIN AND THE GRANDSON NOW 16!!!SARA
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/7/2016 4:47:00 PM
Hi Sara, thank you so much for your visit and congrats! Yes, he is the youngest by one month. We have five grandkids, ages, 26, 24, 21, 16, and 16. I wish you a healthy, happy new year, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/5/2016 2:04:00 PM
Hahahah.....like the sonnet, Sandra. Congratulations on your win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/7/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/4/2016 10:18:00 AM
SANDRA, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/4/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 1:54:00 PM
What a lovely memory, Sandra...and what a splendid surprise; it was well worth waiting for! ~ Congratulations on this top placement! ~ Regards // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/4/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. So nice of you to stop by with your supportive comments and congrats. I wish you a very healthy and happy new year. Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 11:24:00 AM
How sweet! Congrats SNdra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/4/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 10:31:00 AM
Beautiful Sandra! Clever and silly, loved it! Thank you for your participation :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/4/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you once again, Laura, for a very inspiring contest. I enjoyed participating, and I thank you also for my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/22/2015 6:42:00 AM
A very lovely sonnet my dear friend, Sandra. I'm sure this will do well in the contest. I love it and enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing and best wishes in the contest! May I also greet you a Merry Christmas to you and your family! Big Christmas hugs from me, Leonora
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Leonora. I hope your Christmas Day was Blessed and Merry. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/20/2015 11:56:00 PM
I know it's good when I finish reading a poem and a warm smile comes. Splendid write
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/21/2015 8:40:00 AM
Hi Mark, thank you so much for stopping by with your uplifting and supportive comment! Sandra

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