Birth of Me

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Today, I am very inner, and I am looking within me for the answer. O, just dreaming is my reality, and I am lost high above the storm clouds; my life is entangled in wispy, gauzy shrouds. I proclaim, I will stop wandering aimlessly, I will pick- a better journey! I will be reborn this new year, I will face life with strength, courage, and without fear. Only tranquility will leave my lips, and serenity will dwell in my heart; I will surrender the past so it can depart. My next year is a new white page with no hardships, I will write my life- new transcripts! ________________________ December 23, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/BIRTH OF ME Copyright Protected, ID, 17-975213-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Nathan D.

Date: 12/25/2017 11:30:00 AM

Only tranquillity will leave my lips is the best line I have read in a while

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/24/2017 12:15:00 PM

really like how you thought this one out ... really wish you luck ... you got the figure ing out part ... now if we could just follow through ... just swallowed your thoughts ... hurry pat me on the back ... ha ha ... hey ... :) for the years to come ... try'n rub some crooked lip on me ... ha ha again ... for me anyway ... hey ... once again gotta ... thank you for letn is check out your poetry ...

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/23/2017 5:54:00 PM

Oh Constance, wonderful yet deep poetry, to be reborn means to died first,so sad, but your realism is so reassuring, love this, and relate so well to every word you write.