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This does not represent anything to do with my work, it's fiction, and its poetic intention is to make the reader question. It's a preparation for a poetry contest.

Oh beautiful birth control, how wonderful you play, You bring so much joy to my life. You’re like my religion, I can embrace everyone, Especially my neighbour’s blonde wife. Every morning after, I fall, fall from grace off my bed, Fall right onto my knees and pray. I pray to you, my birth control friend, No kids spawned from me, not from this castaway. Oh my beautiful birth control, I love you so much, I love how you conquer from her trench. Now, I need to prepare for tonight’s sexy battle, I need to clean, and remake, my nightly workbench.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/8/2016 10:19:00 PM
This is something really unique and creative, loved every line of it. Your "neighbour's blonde wife" had me in splits. Thank you for sharing, Lewis. ~karam~
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:59:00 AM
Thank you karam. That's really nice. Thanks
Date: 6/7/2016 2:05:00 AM
I was thinking this might be an example of the contest you just posted. Entertaining! ; )
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Date: 6/7/2016 6:54:00 AM
Thanks Connie, yep, love on my mind
Date: 6/7/2016 12:03:00 AM
ha! this is silly funny, Lewis. Remake the workbench? hmmm, that sure conjures up an image to me!! This is a unique write.
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Date: 6/7/2016 12:24:00 AM
thanks Andrea, all images are good.

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