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Birth

Birth Such passion Such pain I want to kill him I feel the sweat, raining, rain He did this to me Do you all not see? Stab or shoot just kill kill kill I call him Bill, yes Kill Bill The evil one that seeded me Until that bright light shines Over me The cries of love like ocean waves Oh my sweet love Look dear what beauty we have made I love you to the ends of the earth Dear newborn suckle upon my dreams Forget my wild and crazy screams I lie content A family at last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/3/2022 5:20:00 AM
Wonderful poem. I love it. God bless you with many more. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/26/2022 10:44:00 PM
Lol well you covered every base here! Thanks for the chuckles Aurore.
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Date: 9/30/2015 2:04:00 PM
The only wonder on this planet giving birth to the most wonderful creation, a child. Love this Aurore :) James
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Date: 10/1/2015 7:22:00 AM
xoxoxox thank you thank you
Date: 8/9/2015 3:58:00 PM
thank you so sweet of you eve xoxo
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Date: 8/9/2015 9:50:00 AM
Aurore, your inspiring work is wonderful, a touch of humor with a touch of love and horrible pain that becomes forgotten when that little miracle of life is here. Hugs Eve A big big 77777
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Aurore Severo
Date: 10/1/2015 7:21:00 AM
sorry entered in wrong window, thanks eve
Date: 8/1/2015 9:19:00 AM
This poem made me laugh in parts, and made me smile in others... what a clever piece. I really enjoyed it. :)
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:50:00 PM
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:50:00 PM
thank you xoxo
Date: 8/1/2015 8:49:00 AM
I like the injection of humor. Great poem.
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:49:00 PM
The injection was sensual, the pain and humor came afterwards xoxo
Date: 8/1/2015 5:40:00 AM
Hi Aurore, what a very clever, excellent piece you have penned! I love it! Please continue to churn out these enjoyable pieces. I look forward to reading more of your work and rate this one a 7! Pandita
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:48:00 PM
I will try xoxo
Date: 7/31/2015 10:53:00 AM
This is excellent! We go through so such pain and emotions giving birth but so worth it! Hugs
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:48:00 PM
xoxoxo thank you
Date: 7/29/2015 6:36:00 PM
a woman's pain....is sure to leave a stain....the reason fathers are hated....because passion manifests longer than anticipated....I can't say that I feel you on this....but I feel you on this.....great write....;)
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/30/2015 1:41:00 AM
thank you, I was being funny, I do not hate man
Date: 7/29/2015 4:22:00 PM
I can relate so well to this poem. Every birth is different though in my experience. I have given birth to four children. My third had me completely delirious from the pain, but it is all worth it. I loved this!
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/30/2015 1:40:00 AM
haha the score is 4-1 then
Date: 7/28/2015 4:20:00 PM
Since I'm a male I'll have to take your word on the pains of giving birth. Thank you for reading my limerick. Much appreciated. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/30/2015 1:38:00 AM
I forgive you being male haha
Date: 7/28/2015 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Yeah that pain can make us a little insane, and then comes the beauty making it all worth while!!! Beautiful poem!!!
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/28/2015 4:08:00 PM
thank you yolanda