Birdseed Boogie

In my meadow surrounded by forest delight, 
there are more cardinals than I can count.
They wait their turn at bird feeders, 
not flying in more than two at a time. A lone blue jay
waits until last to be served. Robins and wrens do not 
understand there is a protocol. 
They swoop in on a cardinal’s turn. 
Do not get me started on crows. They will eat a whole
field of seed in a mob of sixty in two or three minutes, and they do it loudly. 


                            a fast cardinal swoop 
                         pinkish streak in azure sky
                             the birdseed boogie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Beautiful; love the "birdseed boogie"; gonna buy some seed and watch myself.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 6:52 AM
You have to, but I warn you, they will come to your porch and dash away with cat food and be killed by a cat if you start and then suddenly stop feeding them.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 12:59 PM
Nice! Just tweek that bogie into a boogie ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:20 AM
I could do that. I will do that. I am doing that. Thank you for catching that Kim!
Proxenos Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 10:29 AM
What a birdiful poem! They call bird watchers, twitchers - I love birds also, and when we go to the Kruger National Park, we go towards a very tropical weather pattern so bird life is at its best, the further North you go, the better. All your poems are amazing, one better than the other, love, love them! Hugs, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:21 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer. You are such a fan! Love that!
Michael Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 10:02 AM
"birdseed bogie" the crows don't mess around or do they...eating time is boogie time...
Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:22 AM
Eating time is all day long here. There are raccoons on the porch right now at 12:21 a.m. eating cat food.
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