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true story :)

Bird's Poop

Mother-in-law was showing us around
She was funny at times, she had us wound
Bird swooped over her red head
Open hand it pooped and fled
As she was in shock she couldn't make a sound
6/26/2023

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Marikate Kingston

August 9, 2023 at 12:02 PM

Again, your title drew me in. It was so funny. As I sit here, I am waiting for my husband to return from the car wash. Can you guess why? It is true. Te Hee

Linda Alice Fowler

July 15, 2023 at 11:23 AM

LOL...what a tale you tell Eve! Poor MIL at a loss for words. Congratulations on your win! :)

Robert Johnson

July 7, 2023 at 6:32 AM

Congrats on bringing some discretion to all of this excretion.

Andrea Dietrich

July 6, 2023 at 10:35 PM

Fun one and unique for using bird poop. Congrats

David Fisher

July 5, 2023 at 5:22 PM

This is a good one! And non-fiction...I can picture how you were speechless. This happened to me when it landed right on my glasses lens.

Terry Flood

July 5, 2023 at 2:41 AM

Some say it’s supposed to be lucky… maybe it is if you own a shampoo factory. Congrats on your win, Eve.

Eve Roper

July 5, 2023 at 11:42 AM

I’ve never had that experience, and I hope I never do. Thank you so much for commenting.

Beryl Edmonds

July 5, 2023 at 12:39 AM

That really made me laugh Eve, though it wasn’t nice for your mother-in-law, she must have seen red to match her hair I expect. Congratulations on your win in Jan’s contest. Belle

Jan Allison

July 4, 2023 at 4:07 PM

Its happened to me before Eve! many thanks for supporting the poop poem contest:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

July 2, 2023 at 10:56 PM

Nice limerick my dear poet friend Eve. I enjoyed it. It gives smiles on my face midst lil sadness. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes always in the contest and in all your writings. God bless you. Sending lots of hugs. Soupmail for you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 28, 2023 at 1:00 AM

- Uncomfortable with the poop ... that was all she could think about :))) - Good luck in the contest, Eve :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs

Valsa George

June 27, 2023 at 8:51 PM

It has happened to me too many times as I am fond of resting in the shade of trees. Birds on tree tops will be dropping Poop and once it landed right on my head. Funny limerick Eve.