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Birds In Winter

As golden, green and russet leaves must fall,
And trees become skeletal wintry bare,
I see so many birds, some large, some small, 
Hear them sing as they flutter unaware.

Hush, listen to the thrush as it replies
To the melodies of the sweet robin,
Look, they would fly up in the open skies,
Leaving me alone, my heart a throbbing.

I will build a small wooden bird feeder
Entice the birds that dwell in cold regions
Find soft nuts and other food that's sweeter.
May they gather round and round in legions

Let them eat and stay as always secure,
Let winter rage, birds will thrive and endure.

02/14/2021

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George Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 4:37 AM
I love everything about birds and the way they are taken care of. In the west, bird feeders are so popular. Here I tried one, but no other bird except a few crows come and eat them away. Once I had several love birds. But when snakes started coming, I gave them to my friends. In the patio, I had two finches in a cage.... One of them eventually died and I let the other fly away ! A lovely sonnet Victor
Y. Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 9:02 PM
Hi Victor, I'm so happy to see this write on the winner's list. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Enjoyed this one Victor, as I always find your writing compelling, congrats on your win!
Ball Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 12:39 AM
Lovely Victor. I love the sweet picture here. I'm famous for feeding the birds around here. Been told to stop feeding them in the parking lot at work. People don't want them to poop on their cars. I just wash it off. Some people can't take life other than their own. This is a sweet one Victor. Well done. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:20 AM
what a charming sonnet Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:41 PM
A good feeling poem of love and compassion for nature. Hugs Eve
Theraven Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:51 PM
Victor, A wonderful promise of hope in your poem as nature's fittest look on. "birds will thrive and endure". -Richard
Buehler Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Birds are so interesting to watch. It's no wonder bird feeders are so popular. Your poem was delightful, and the picture as well. :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:54 PM
A fun write, dear poet!
Downing  Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 3:31 PM
I’m a bird lover too, I used to rescue the broken and sick ones. And your poem just made me love them even more. Beautiful, Vic :)
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:44 AM
- I love to feed the birds in the winter ... many who come to visit :) - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 6:49 AM
Hi Victor, You've penned such a well-written write. Your love for birds is evident in every line. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
Fowler Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 6:32 AM
A beautiful write Victor. I've spent double what I usually do on bird feed (95 pounds so far) in the last month due to the freaky cold weather in my area. I love the feathered friends. :) Linda
Pandit Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Loved this ode to birds, Victor--your poem sings for them brilliantly.
Kitchin Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 3:26 AM
Victor, I love this sweet winter bird poem and the part of thrush singing to the robin! hugs
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February 14, 2021 at 2:03 AM
This poem touched a chord in my heart. Beautiful birds no shelter in winter, barren trees. I feel for them.Good you are feeding them. God bless you! Wish someone would build shelter for them in winter. Take care Rama
Logan Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 2:03 AM
It's such a pleasure to watch birds flit and flutter, interacting with each other. How harsh Winter must be for them. A fine sonnet, Victor.
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February 14, 2021 at 1:48 AM
I love birds... especially the prettier ones in their vibrant wraps, gliding and grazing on the seeds... a lovely poem, Victor, with gentle hope for the season. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 1:11 AM
No more beautiful sight than birds in the garden at wintertime, we always put out breadcrumbs for them. Well written sonnet Victor. Tom
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February 14, 2021 at 12:59 AM
A beautiful sonnet Victor, birds bring such joy to the earth and sky and in winter though the trees are bare, they sing to let you know they’re there. Lovely! ~~ Belle
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