Birds Baked In Pies

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Birds baked in pies, babies rocked out of trees
Kids all falling down from some dreadful disease
Young Hansel and Gretel
May wind up in a kettle
What tormented minds write stories like these?

12/4/22

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Date: 1/26/2023 7:56:00 PM
I think Humpty Dumpty is about the death of a soldier who couldn't be saved. All depicting such dark times in history. I'm going to look up the London Bridge origin, interested now. Your poem would be a good topic for a college children's lit' class or a history paper: A Deeper Look into the Dark Nursery Rhymes of the 17th Century. Your poem could be part of the assignment, maybe on everyone's first page. Your writing is so clever!!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/31/2023 5:37:00 PM
The Grimm brothers should be forewarned just by their names, I would start there! Thank you, Marikate for your insightful input! Robert
Date: 12/9/2022 2:28:00 AM
Lovely limerick.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/8/2023 2:47:00 PM
I thought it was quite lovely myself!
Date: 12/8/2022 2:49:00 AM
And after all was said and done..."Humpty Dumpty had a great fall" Witty Limerick, Robert. Love it!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/8/2022 3:23:00 PM
Humpty's not the shell of the man he used to be! Glad you enjoyed! Robert
Date: 12/5/2022 3:36:00 PM
They get outrageously frightful, old nursery rhymes don't they, and wise tales as well.
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Date: 12/5/2022 4:18:00 PM
Some may call it child abuse, because they make a significant impact!
Date: 12/5/2022 1:55:00 PM
Good one. They say that so many of these were political works describing events in the political arena back in those days. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/5/2022 3:40:00 PM
Absolutely you should check the story of why London Bridges was falling down, Sara. Thanks for your visit, Robert
Date: 12/5/2022 5:26:00 AM
I'll have the boiled wolf and a side of Grandma...
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/5/2022 4:02:00 PM
Little Red says to have Little Miss Muffet's goulash, stay away from the whey!
Date: 12/4/2022 8:02:00 PM
Yeah - Those Brits sure are psychotic, aren't they? 'Nursery rhymes,' my arse! :) gw
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/5/2022 4:14:00 PM
You think that's bad, what's up little miss Muffet and what in God's name is a tuffet!
Date: 12/4/2022 7:18:00 PM
You know, Robert, I too have wondered about that from time to time. Some nursery rhymes are filled with horror and horrendous conclusions.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/5/2022 4:16:00 PM
Look at Jack, he got a fractured skull, in a so-called delightful nursery rhyme!
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