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Poetry/haiku/birds
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1558-693-30
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 30, 2023
For the International Standard contest, Summer Haiku x 2, Nature Themed
sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 07/12/2023

First Place

Tennessee bird watching — Bird News — The Wood Thrush Shop

summer trees singing for within branches hide birds ~ green leaves sheltering from the green they glide spreading pretty summer wings ~ gathering nest twigs

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/26/2023 5:52:00 PM

Beautiful poem! Lovely read! It is about summer birds. It is a good idea to write haikus about autumn birds, winter birds, and spring birds. Have good time. Best regards.

Constance La France
Date: 8/27/2023 9:01:00 AM

Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, great idea to write about birds in every season, blessings !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2023 11:14:00 AM

Congrats, Dear Heart. This is awesome. HOpe your dr. appt. went well.

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:41:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment, the appointment did not go well !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2023 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance! Nice imagery!

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:42:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment !

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/14/2023 1:35:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you and congrats. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:42:00 PM

Gine, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, God bless and love !

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2023 6:03:00 PM

A picturesque set of haiku, Constance! Congrats of your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:42:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings !

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2023 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely Haiku write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:43:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings !

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/12/2023 10:52:00 AM

What a charming moment in time you have captured in your colorful haiku! There is such a sense of movement and the cadence of flight in this poem! Congratulations and blessings my friend!

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:43:00 PM

Sam, thankyou so much for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, blessings !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2023 9:28:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful summer haiku, Constance :) - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:44:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, hugs !

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 7/12/2023 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations Constance on the winning! Love the birds haikus. Beautiful as birds...!

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:45:00 PM

Maria, thank you so much for the congratulations, and compliment !

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/12/2023 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations, Dear Constance! Pretty summer Haikus - to me, summer means playful chirping of birds!

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:46:00 PM

Mala, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment, and comment !

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/12/2023 5:10:00 AM

Constance, congratulations on your first place win, love the bird imagery!

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:46:00 PM

Tania, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations and compliment !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2023 8:04:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. I am glad spring has arrived for you in Canada. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2023 2:26:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, God Bless !

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/30/2023 12:24:00 PM

Hello Constance, Enjoyed this poem. Birsd are wonderful. i enjoy their morning songs. i enjoy the Dove's song and the geese and robins. and blue jays. Love & Friendship\ Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2023 11:37:00 AM

Hello Constance, the bird songs are beautiful to listen to. A lovely way to wake up to. LOve & Friendship| Darlene/

Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2023 2:27:00 PM

Darlene, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, I love bird songs too, God Bless !

Jay Narain

Date: 6/30/2023 11:50:00 AM

nice one. consistent haiku.

Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2023 2:27:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, God Bless !

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/30/2023 9:44:00 AM

What a beautiful picture and poem, birds are amazing, the nest they build are amazing so closely woven together, and the ones under bridges made of clay substance, always leaves me pondering how this is possible: ). Surely science has a reason but who told the birds lol : )

Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2023 2:28:00 PM

Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, and nice comment, God Bless !

Lin Lane

Date: 6/30/2023 9:27:00 AM

You’ve created a pair of fine Haiku with a nod to summer, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2023 2:28:00 PM

Lin, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, God Bless !

Jan Allison

Date: 6/30/2023 9:10:00 AM

oh how charming Constance, I've been seeing lots of birds building nests recently xx

Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2023 9:13:00 AM

Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, here also, the birds are very busy, God Bless !