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Bird's-Eye View

A buzzard from his vantage point of sweeping lofty heights Enjoyed a cornucopia of captivating sights. He soared above the rolling hills, the meadows and ravines, His bird's-eye-view encompassed ocean blues and forest greens. But once, a splash of colour made his sharp-eyed vision blink; A stunning apparition dressed in fine flamboyant pink. And like a ballerina it performed a pirouette Then took a slow bow downwards as the sun began to set. A beautiful flamingo in a lake of cobalt blue Had brought a touch of magic to a buzzard's scenic view. 15/01/19 'Buzzards And Flamingos Poetry Contest' : sponsored by Anthony Slausin 2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 18 Mark Toney : 3/13/2019 N/A Na Re-Run Poetry Contest : Sponsored by John Hamilton 22.06.19

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Date: 1/26/2022 10:15:00 PM
"cornucopia of captivating sights" -Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2020 11:24:00 AM
This flows brilliantly. Loved reading this.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/14/2021 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, gary.
Date: 7/9/2019 9:56:00 PM
Wendy, I was swept up by your amazing imagery that let my imagination soar. Simply stunning! Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/14/2021 2:07:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated feedback, Susan.
Date: 2/14/2019 6:59:00 PM
absolutely stunning Wendy, I saw a buzzard for real for he first time when we were on holiday, what a magnificent creature:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/14/2021 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for 'stopping by, Jan.
Date: 2/13/2019 6:39:00 PM
What a great poem! I love intelligent rhyme that seems so effortless. Birds are an endless source of inspiration for me too. Nice job.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/22/2019 2:48:00 PM
That's very kind of you,Mary. I don't know where the vision came from but enjoyed the final result!
Date: 2/13/2019 1:12:00 PM
Wendy this is my 3rd comment on this poem! I am so tickled to see it at the top of the "best new poems" list!!!! More congrats :)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/13/2019 1:41:00 PM
I've no idea how they choose the poems for the list as others have far more faves and comments than this one. A mystery which I shall enjoy for the short duration until I'm 'toppled'!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/13/2019 1:27:00 PM
How kind of you to take the time to comment again, P.S. I admit it's one of my favourites and if I were an artist, I'd love to have a picture of it with the poem underneath. How strange that a title which initially leaves you dumbfounded can take the imagination up,up and away!
Date: 2/8/2019 5:39:00 PM
I don't believe I've ever thought of a buzzard in any way but scavenger and homely! You changed all that for me, plus he appreciated the beautiful pink flamingo! The descriptions you Used were so spot on, that I really did see from The buzzards viewpoint! I loved this so much! ......Sherilynn
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/13/2019 1:38:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Sherilynn. I had no idea where to go with this one when I first saw the title! You wonder where the sponsor's get their ideas from don't you!
Date: 2/6/2019 10:02:00 AM
Cute one. Enjoyed reading your winning work. I enjoyed writing one for the contest about the buzzards and flamingos. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Sara
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/13/2019 1:39:00 PM
Yes-well done for your creation too,Sara and thank you for your encouraging comment.
Date: 1/30/2019 9:17:00 PM
Wow!!! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/31/2019 1:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Beata. Congratulations too on your various wins recently.
Date: 1/29/2019 9:24:00 PM
What a delightful poem. Sounds like the buzzard is about to fall in love. Congrats on your silver medal with this gem, Wendy.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/30/2019 4:44:00 AM
What a fun thought but I think it was one of those rare one-off moments in life that he'll return to in thought, high up on those cold rocky crags!
Date: 1/20/2019 3:36:00 PM
Wendy, I am back to FAVE this poem because I keep coming back to read it. Congratulations on placing in Brian's contest. I expect more honors for this gem. <3
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/13/2019 1:39:00 PM
Gosh- You were right!
Date: 1/15/2019 6:17:00 PM
Wendy this flows and rhymes so nicely! You have written a beautiful poem for this contest! :)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/19/2019 10:05:00 AM
Thank you for such an encouraging comment,P.S. I wonder what prompted Anthony's unusual but fun title choice!?

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