Birdlady

All the little feathers in her wings
Stood firmly at attention
And as she stood tall
Her straightened back
Unfurled the last twisted barbs
She stood on her tip toes at the station
Waiting for the fog to clear
The air's stomach was full of rain
She stood tall and taut
Gazing out over the rails, the buildings, the parks, her empty home, the little dots of strangers, she saw broadly
Her lost love and past
And just flew above it all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Uplifting and satisfying read Cooper. Thank you! :)
Poteet Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 6:52 AM
Dreamy, hopeful, related to the power we have within us to overcome the rain, fog and barbs of life. Your straightened back and tip toes lines illustrate the determination we need in such trials. Relationships grow old and bothersome, healing comes in leaving the past behind and moving onward, upward to newness. Enjoyed perusing your poems this AM - hope you will post us some more soon.
Etheridge Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 10:49 PM
Just reread your comment. Thank you for helping me understand it better perhaps. Ha. You’re great!
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