Bird Music

~~~~Bird Music~~~~ "in the darkness before dawn the sparrow sings his song" ~~~ as the sun begins to rise the canary greets the morning dawn. with a voice ten times his size his melody goes on and on, serenading deer and fawn. under shaded trees chickadees run to and fro chirping and at ease while hunting for their next meal ...joining the chorus with zeal. ~~~ jealous jays know no melody instead, God gave them a rare beauty
~~~ for Constance La France's 'For (Four) Beautiful Birds' contest monoku, quintain, tanka, crystalline by Francine Roberts, 26/04/2011
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June 3, 2011 at 8:52 AM
An excellent write here!Congrats Francine on your big win...
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June 2, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Sorry to be so tardy in congrats...This is just beautiful and deserved a 1st BG
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June 2, 2011 at 1:14 PM
congratulations Francine, good to see your 1st place win today in Constance's contest
Kendrick Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fine work...Sara
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June 1, 2011 at 9:03 PM
I loved this the first time I read it, Francine. A very well deserved win. I really enjoyed reading it again, especially the part about the canary serenading deer and fawn! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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June 1, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Many congrats, Francine : )
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Francine
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's "For(Four) Beautful Birds"contest Francine. Love, Carol
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June 1, 2011 at 2:41 AM
Congrats on your win Francine xx
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:21 PM
lWell done Francine and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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May 31, 2011 at 9:11 PM
our nature queen strikes again! applause to you for being a topper, francine! :) huggs, nette
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May 31, 2011 at 8:24 PM
congrats Francine on your wonderful first place win in the four birds contest with this wonderful write ..so elegant.. enjoy your top spot..luv..
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May 31, 2011 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations Francine on first place in my contest, I just loved the image your poem created. Could you send me by soup mail, your address, so I can forward the Certificate of Achievement in Poetry which is the prize in this contest~~
Johnson Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 11:35 PM
Francine your little birds are full of words, and you translate their songs, Canary speaks his morning prayer, And Sparrows come along. Very good verse babe love...Don
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April 29, 2011 at 4:11 PM
francine I am very impressed with this delightful scene you have created here. what a wonderful woodland scene. I hope it scores high!
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April 28, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Thanks for your comment, Francine. Actually, I'd have to tape the burger to my stomach because that's where all the extra weight goes. Bird legs over here, courtesy of my father. Love, Carolyn
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April 27, 2011 at 1:27 PM
Superb write for Constance's contest, Francine. I could picture all of these birds and hear their sweet tunes. I have heard blue jays "screech," but it's not much of a song. Best one I've seen for the contest and hope to see your poem at the top. Love, Carolyn
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April 26, 2011 at 8:52 PM
This is very well crafted.Love it a lot !
La France Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Well done!
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April 26, 2011 at 1:24 PM
enjoyed reading this fine refreshing poem.
Amadore Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Quite enjoyable. Good work.
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April 26, 2011 at 10:50 AM
I enjoyed reading of your bird music Francine, nicely written. Best wishes in the contest ~ Sharon
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April 26, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Good work that reads like winners' circle for sure..Good luck in the contest..Early morning birds are so entertaining..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Received soup mail and did a correction..Sara
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