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Bird Bath Oasis

. Ah Oh! So refreshing to have a bath A cool sip of clear water Splash! Splash! Splash!! Shake, Shake Flutter!!! Until a bigger bird moves into the Bath And S E N D S * Q` M uail; E quail\\; Packing away! ^^ ;;;

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Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 9/16/2010 12:04:00 AM

Love shape poetry and this is no exception with the delights you have packed into it. The quali in particular won the smile from me! Well done! Kindest thoughts, Anna-m Marie.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2010 9:40:00 AM

It was pleasure to read your poetry today Doris. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/15/2010 2:21:00 AM

Triple WoW, Doris! awesome shape and content, hope your day ahead will be a blessed one.. Thank you for your kind comments always.. love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/14/2010 9:17:00 PM

Wow, wow, wow. This seems like hard work. Your imagery is superb and so is your shape. Thanks for your comments.

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/14/2010 5:20:00 PM

this are not always's easy to do and this looks like it should be featured great work doris loved the imagery too also thanks for all your kind comments on my stuff I will be back to give ya more as soon as I can catch up alittle here while I can stay healty thanks for understanding blessings

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2010 4:44:00 PM

Originality plus Doris.. enjoyed the interesting lines of the story... and the presentation is great... u do this so well my friend.. enjoyed and prayers to entire family for Mom tomorrow..with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/14/2010 3:46:00 PM

Really cute and I admire the way you used the form to create both the bath and the quail. Super Souper composition of style and form, Doris! Love, Carolyn

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/14/2010 2:53:00 PM

Oh that's really cute..loved it..Take care~Deb

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/14/2010 1:42:00 PM

I like this poem D. Hey sorry to disappoint you with the serious poem, it was a fit of sanity in my insanity. Wont happen again. Promise

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/14/2010 1:37:00 PM

that is adorable