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Bird

He comes flying in the 'morn high above me dipping and diving. He sings a song, a melody sweet drifting down, touching my heart and soul lifting my spirit. He spins and twirls, whirling in the sunshine, he floats on the breeze with ease. There is no fear of crashing down. Oh yes, I admire his great happiness, strength and his courage I love his filigree feathers fluttering, white and wispy so delicate yet strong. Now he plummets downward and calls my name loudly, come fly today, fly sweet earth girl, and I laugh 'cause I am flying, flying in my mind, oh yes, gliding and falling drifting, twirling whirling down then up high high. ______________________________________ October 6, 2019 Example for my Writing Challenge, October 2019 - Bird- (but you can use any form for your entry) Poetry/Shape/Bird/ November 14, 2018 Copyright Protected, ID 18-1186-535-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 12/27/2019 10:20:00 AM
This is awesome!!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 5:33:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for the awesome, these shape poems are so hard to do, this one took me all day, but I am proud of it ~
Date: 10/20/2019 8:35:00 AM
This is brilliant poetry, Constance, adore your creativity:)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/20/2019 10:34:00 AM
Jo, thanks for the brilliant, I really like how my bird turned out !
Date: 10/8/2019 11:08:00 AM
Wow you would be flying high if you entered this gem in a contest, your creativity is enviable Constance! Hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2019 5:29:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the compliment, it means a lot to me !
Date: 10/7/2019 3:57:00 PM
Wow! You are a woman of many talents, Constance! I love your flying bird shape and the 'feel happy' words of this delightful poem. There is a lot of movement throughout. ~ Regards // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 10/7/2019 6:24:00 PM
Paul, thank you so much for the compliment, it means a lot to me !
Date: 10/6/2019 6:49:00 AM
It would place first if you could enter your own...wonderful words expressed and then in a shape too. Simply brilliant.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/6/2019 10:53:00 AM
Jeanne, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 10/6/2019 2:43:00 AM
Fantastic example for the contest, like always you are awesome with your work. Hugs eve
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Constance La France
Date: 10/6/2019 10:54:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the fantastic !
Date: 10/5/2019 11:43:00 PM
This is beautiful and worthy of the contest if you could enter it :) I am no good at shape poems. I can't get them to copy from my word document to the soup entry page... they mess up there and I don't know why - either way I can't get them to soup from my word. I love this so - it's beautifully done... Love and prayers, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/5/2019 11:51:00 PM
Gina, thank you for the beautiful and the compliment, yeah shape poems are not easy to do... this one took me hours.. but for my writing challenge you can use any form.
Date: 10/5/2019 11:30:00 PM
Awesome and beautiful ~ I loved this, Dear Heart!! Love everything about it ~ a fav <3
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Constance La France
Date: 10/5/2019 11:36:00 PM
Hello, thank you for the beautiful and for the compliment and the fav !!!!

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