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Bikini Blues

On Saturday night in Waikiki
The teenagers turn rather freaky
Though blue as a smurf
They all love to surf
Like a Kahanamoku tiki!

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Heidi Sands

April 23, 2022 at 3:53 PM

I love Hawaii. I enjoyed going there very much. Well done :)

Valsa George

April 17, 2022 at 7:10 PM

It is always interesting to see teenagers in Bikinis.... ! They are like butterflies !

Sara Kendrick

April 17, 2022 at 1:47 PM

Well, I can't imagine what it might be like in Hawaii especially when I was a teen. I expect my mother would have kept me at home most of the time. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Rico Leffanta

April 17, 2022 at 3:55 PM

With only a bikini between you and the water, chill takes on an old meaning! Aloha!

Anne E Sangster - K

April 17, 2022 at 12:32 PM

Very witty Rico. I smiled as I read each line. Cheers Anne :-)

Rico Leffanta

April 17, 2022 at 3:54 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!

Janice Canerdy

April 16, 2022 at 5:57 PM

Clever, well-done, Rico. Janice

Rico Leffanta

April 17, 2022 at 11:10 AM

Mahalo, Janice! Aloha!

I Am Anaya

April 16, 2022 at 1:24 PM

Cute, what a sight that must be! "Waterman" is finally here

Rico Leffanta

April 17, 2022 at 11:10 AM

I have not seen the film, but have hundreds of photos on the internet of the Duke Kahanamoku OceanFest tandem surf competitions over the years. Enjoy! Aloha!