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Bikini Blues

On Saturday night in Waikiki The teenagers turn rather freaky Though blue as a smurf They all love to surf Like a Kahanamoku tiki!

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Heidi Sands

Date: 4/23/2022 3:53:00 PM

I love Hawaii. I enjoyed going there very much. Well done :)

Valsa George

Date: 4/17/2022 7:10:00 PM

It is always interesting to see teenagers in Bikinis.... ! They are like butterflies !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2022 1:47:00 PM

Well, I can't imagine what it might be like in Hawaii especially when I was a teen. I expect my mother would have kept me at home most of the time. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/17/2022 7:19:00 PM

Lol, wish I was there!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/17/2022 3:55:00 PM

With only a bikini between you and the water, chill takes on an old meaning! Aloha!

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 4/17/2022 12:32:00 PM

Very witty Rico. I smiled as I read each line. Cheers Anne :-)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/17/2022 3:54:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/16/2022 5:57:00 PM

Clever, well-done, Rico. Janice

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/17/2022 11:10:00 AM

Mahalo, Janice! Aloha!

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/16/2022 1:24:00 PM

Cute, what a sight that must be! "Waterman" is finally here in L.A.--gonna see "The Big Kahuna" soon!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/17/2022 11:10:00 AM

I have not seen the film, but have hundreds of photos on the internet of the Duke Kahanamoku OceanFest tandem surf competitions over the years. Enjoy! Aloha!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/16/2022 12:05:00 PM

good one, rico! i had to look up kahanamoku, but i learned something, so thank you!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/17/2022 11:09:00 AM

Duke Kahanamoku is famous everywhere on this planet except Manhattan? Aloha!