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Bike Courier Chronicles - the Archdiocese

A little man for such a big title. Rosy cheeks flushing the blue of his eyes like birds from a bush; Charisma came to mind as his eyes met mine. He was the big guy I could tell By the stiffness of everyone else In the straight faced entourage Seeing right through me. His Holiness... Or humbleness Perhaps gave this guy his clout. 2/6/2020

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Date: 2/6/2020 10:14:00 PM
Never thought of archbishops as the humble sort. Heartening that you saw that possibility in him. Thanks, Maureen. :) Gershon
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/7/2020 7:01:00 AM
Me neither ;), Maybe it's the hat. He wasn't wearing it. Hugs! xomo
Date: 2/6/2020 6:24:00 PM
The title certainly grabs attention! Aloha! Rico
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/7/2020 7:02:00 AM
I had to set the scene ;), Aloha my friend, xomo!
Date: 2/6/2020 1:36:00 PM
I like the contrast of holiness and humbleness, very striking, Maureen-
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/7/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Michelle. xomo
Date: 2/6/2020 11:15:00 AM
Great one Maureen :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/7/2020 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, xomo!
Date: 2/6/2020 10:51:00 AM
Such a cool piece my friend. I don't know if it was suppose to but this made me smile at the end.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/7/2020 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Chris! You were by design made to smile (success!), I think clout is a funny word. xomo ;),

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