Biggest Holiday Disaster of My Life

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?????????????????????? picture of a girl on a holiday

Another souvenir poem:)) On that same holiday, I also lost a necklace with

a cross-pendant in an amethyst stone while we're travelling. I purchased

that silver necklace a day before coming back home. So careless of me to drop

it from my body bag.

While preparing for my five-day holiday, I chanted, Yo ho ho ho!
As I packed most important thing, I was in full whistling jaw
So many stuffs to take, didn’t know what bag could make
Shifting taste left my first girl-things inside an unchosen portmanteau.

As I finally landed to a delightful holiday scenery far, far away
I tried to enjoy a whole-day tour ‘though uneased at first red bay
With nudging ebb, running through jeans and winter clothes
I ricked my leg and nose… limited smiles to dazzling view array

So many places to go with lots of panorama to see and meet
But feeling restless ‘till sunset, with porous pads I needed flag retreat
The first night I checked in a hotel, I nastily worried and panicked
Nowhere to find my gears… unbudgeted, I paced three at night market

I was going around cool places in a bus, but didn’t climb a tower
When shopping beauty- foods started, I was thinking of hotel hair blower
To dry up my wet gears in manteaux ‘till midnight before another day
That’s my biggest disaster but I’d survived like I was in a House of Big Brother.


Oct. 21, 2016              1. 45am

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/6/2016 11:19:00 PM
Leonora, is soup being weird for you tonight. I have so many comments to do, but I better just get off!!!
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/18/2016 9:08:00 AM
Hello my dear friend, Andrea. I'm so Sorry, I just came by. I had a prolonged cold and cough and still recuperating. Just dropping by to say, thank you very much for visiting me again. About the oddity the last time I came here was inconspicuous for me, perhaps due to my very short time of stay/passing by here at PS. Ok, i'll be back soon. Thank you so much once again. Advance Merry Christmas my dear friend! Hugs!
Date: 11/13/2016 10:06:00 AM
Hey, Leonora. Thanks for visiting me. I don't know if I can find a poem of yours I have not yet seen, but it's so good to see you here. Will you stay a while this time?
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/17/2016 6:05:00 AM
Hello! You're welcome my dear friend. Always my pleasure. Thanks a lot for your time too. I seldom write a poem now coz I'm always busy and due to eyes exhaustion. Usually in the evening/night when I'm home, I prefer lying down listening music. I will try to stay on holidays but I can't promise. Thanks a lot for your visit too. Many hugs from me. God bless!
Date: 11/2/2016 2:26:00 PM
- What experience .... you will never forget this holiday dear Leonora - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/12/2016 10:50:00 PM
You're right but I think I should junk it my dear friend. :))). I start to forget things already:( Thank you so much for stopping by. Have a great weekend! Hugs!
Date: 11/1/2016 5:23:00 AM
good grief, i hope this is fiction, lory... i can visualize the horror of not having your things... if you were in P I, things would have been better.. nonetheless, superb read... happy all souls day!..huggs
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/12/2016 10:40:00 PM
:))))...It really happened my dear friend. You're right, when I was in PI, absolutely no problem at all:) Thank you so much for stopping by.. Belated happy all souls day. Hugs!
Date: 10/31/2016 6:50:00 PM
What a time you had, Leonora. Wow! Is this for that Yanky contest?? That one looks so hard to do, but I want to work on it!! Thanks so much for your contest and having it judged on Halloween. Happy Halloween to you, my sweet friend.
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/12/2016 10:26:00 PM
You're welcome for the contest. Three cheers again!
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/12/2016 10:25:00 PM
This was written with the request of my cousin after I've narrated my experience to her my dear friend. Got a time during the typhoon in our place, and I didn't sleep over night. I saw the contest and I patterned it. Belated Happy Halloween my dear friend. Hope you're always well. I'm always praying for you. Many hugs.
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