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Big Surprise

A young fellow soldier from Kentucky He considered himself rather lucky Stationed at Ft. Knox, Opened a vault box But, alas, it was empty … how sucky! written October 11, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/15/2021 11:41:00 AM

What a really mean trick! Someone we know?

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/15/2021 12:43:00 PM

No one I know ... just my overworked muse!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/12/2021 8:48:00 PM

Hello Milton ... mustn't have realized that there's no freebies at Fort Knox - thank you Milton - Lindsay

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/12/2021 9:18:00 PM

Apparently so, Lindsay. I've heard it said that the gold isn't even there, that it's stored in a more highly-secure place. But, I do know you can't get close to the vault at Ft. Knox. Oh well...would be fodder for a fantastic movie.

Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/11/2021 7:57:00 PM

Poor guy. I'd like to imagine what I would fill his box with. Fun to think about it.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2021 9:06:00 PM

Yes it is. Ft. Knox is almost impenetrable; must be lots of gold stored in the vaults.

Debra L Brown

Date: 10/11/2021 7:57:00 PM

Brought a smile to my face. very good!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2021 9:06:00 PM

Thanks so much, Debra. I'm glad.