Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Big Stud-On-Campus

He was the big stud-on-campus, was Todd,

   Until he was nabbed smokin' somethin' odd!

      Coach booted him from the team.

         Up in smoke went Mommy's dream,

            Of Todd being on a pro-football squad!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Jack Ellison June 12, 2018 at 1:41 PM You and me... limbuds!!! Is that a word? Robert L. Hinshaw June 12, 2018 at 3:16 PM You created a new term, limbuds! I like that and keep cranking out your very creative and witty lims, Jack Many thx for your support and encouragement - Bob

Ilene Bauer March 14, 2014 at 5:01 PM ha! very funny with perfect rhyme! nice one, bob...

Robert Pettit March 14, 2014 at 3:17 PM Another superb write, Sarge. Good going!

Carol Eastman March 14, 2014 at 10:05 AM Loved it... My son's in a fraternity! And studly is his game. I don't want to know what he has done! He's there... and I lecture him at times... but from me he runs... if I knew all the truths... I'd probably be over come!