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Big Day

Big day To play Entails New trails Our goal Nice stroll Track hoe Let’s go! Big rock? Knock, knock John Deere Is here Weighs tons? Gone, fun! These trees? A breeze! Eats dirt Dessert Start top Don’t stop No frown Just down Reach vale? Exhale! Walk land It’s grand! God ask? Watch task Safe day We pray None hurt More dirt No fails Smooth sails ---------- for the A New Hiku Footle Tanka Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand written on 11/7/22

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Date: 11/10/2022 7:10:00 AM
Wow - I like this Jeff. My kind of work site. Congratulations your win! :)
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Date: 11/8/2022 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2022 7:35:00 PM
Can I come?
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Date: 11/7/2022 6:08:00 PM
Sounds like a big accomplishment!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/7/2022 6:38:00 PM
It is coming along. Huge job, day 1 - will probably take 3-4.
Date: 11/7/2022 1:23:00 PM
A refreshing hike indeed (on two footles). Thx 4 posting. ~;o)
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Date: 11/7/2022 8:14:00 AM
Great one. Well written :)
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