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Big City Life

I entered the city scared and unsure, with no money nor prospects of a job. And drifting with the city's human tide, I was acting cocky and immature. I felt homesick: and aching for the cure, entrenched myself into big city life. But forming friendships was no easy task my trust in people was oft premature. The night's neon lights flaunted their allure, but reality soon burst that bubble. For the cost of being young and naïve, levies a price youth's obliged to endure. Eating whatever food I could procure necessity taught me to beg and steal, while assuring me, my motives were pure. (Rhyme) 03/08/2020

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Date: 4/3/2020 11:16:00 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/3/2020 4:48:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2020 7:37:00 PM
Living on whatever I could procure/ necessity taught me to steal and rob/ while assuring me my motives were pure./ It is a distortion of truth, either insidious, or from outside. What is truth, what is beauty, needs no persuasive influence or sedation. We assassinate poetry to craft our own definition, exactly like imposing a stain mark on a white piece of cloth and blame poetry for that. Poetry is just a medium of art, the rest depends on us.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/9/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Tamanna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2020 1:29:00 PM
Reads like you might have some experience on the subject, Emile. You did very well with the prompt. Good luck.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2020 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, you write what you know... I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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