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Big Breath That I Take

Big Breath That I Take While days and waves both would break, Many more things for me God did make; To survive; Remain alive; Including each big breath that I take. Jim Horn Is this challenging you to write more rhyming poems?

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Date: 10/12/2017 7:39:00 PM
Sometimes all we need is a big breath of fresh air when we are feeling down... Very well expressed, James... I do like the rhyming in this poem and that has always been my favorite way to write :)
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