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Big Blue Boat

I set off in a big blue boat
I wanted to see the world afloat
today I talked to a whale
I drank some cold ale
I tried but this is all I wrote
Date Written:2/23/2022
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Date: 2/25/2022 7:51:00 PM
This is enough to make us smile.... Paula ! Well done ! Thanks....! Hugs !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2022 7:54:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad this write made you smile. I love to give out smiles. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 2/24/2022 8:28:00 PM
ha, ha, ha! Great expedition, Paula. Start a 'Dear Diary' with this one!! ~ Sailing Away, Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 8:50:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my write. Yes, a diary I will start on this big boat trip. Now to sail far, far away. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
Date: 2/23/2022 1:04:00 PM
Clever write! I always love imagery and yours is delightful! :)Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 8:47:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you love my imagery on this write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

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