Big Blue Boat

I set off in a big blue boat
I wanted to see the world afloat
today I talked to a whale
I drank some cold ale
I tried but this is all I wrote
Date Written:2/23/2022
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 7:51 PM
This is enough to make us smile.... Paula ! Well done ! Thanks....! Hugs !
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad this write made you smile. I love to give out smiles. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 8:28 PM
ha, ha, ha! Great expedition, Paula. Start a 'Dear Diary' with this one!! ~ Sailing Away, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my write. Yes, a diary I will start on this big boat trip. Now to sail far, far away. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
Calasibetta Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 1:04 PM
Clever write! I always love imagery and yours is delightful! :)Paulette
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:47 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you love my imagery on this write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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