Biding Time

In the old days, the sting of the pavement
Would cushion our bones while we ran
We'd tread the water until the waves meant
Nothing but curves and a pension plan

The clock would watch our eyes shift
From youthful mass to wrinkled mist
While seas of green rattled our feet
And blindness took hold of all we could see

With ebullient eyes we searched for hope
The grounds of ruin dictating all we spoke
Could you read us through an hour glass,
You'd say: Let us bleed onto our past

Let the cold pin us to the wind
Our words tear open before they can mend
Let our dreams shape us at last
Our failures subside, our dark memories lapse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 12, 2016 at 10:30 AM
nice to see this one again KIM... Love LINDA
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March 9, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Kim. Love Carol
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March 7, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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December 9, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Well, you simply can't just tease us with one great poem. MORE! MORE! MORE!
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December 9, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Congrats kim on "Biding Time" being featured. Vince
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December 9, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. I loved the line "the clock would watch..." Very clever. So often we hear about "watching the clock", it is an interesting perspective to turn that around. The whole poem has so much of life in it. I'm glad that you shared it today.
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December 9, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on your work being featured on homepage this week..Also, welcome to the soup family ...May you entertain us with many more excellent post about great topics..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Time takes its toll on humankind and animal alike..Sara
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December 7, 2010 at 9:05 AM
Congratulations Kim on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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October 19, 2010 at 8:44 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kim. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 18, 2010 at 4:25 PM
interesting write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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October 17, 2010 at 8:46 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members.. good luck with luv..
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