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Bid On My Love - Sold Out

Bid on My Love – Sold Out


My heart is now on a wanted poster
having escaped twisted passions toaster

Now, in reflection, I’m forced to confess
each moment together – painfully priceless.


12/8/2015

submitted to – Bid on My Love – Poetry contest
sponsor – Tammy Reams

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Skat A Date: 12/16/2015 12:45:00 AM John, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT** Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/14/2015 6:30:00 PM yours was so original. Congrats. Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/14/2015 9:33:00 PM Thanks Andrea

Sandra Haight Date: 12/14/2015 6:01:00 PM Great humor, John, Congrats on your win. Sandra Login to Reply

Balveen Cheema Date: 12/14/2015 10:28:00 AM John, the twinge of humour is so appeasing!congrats! Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/14/2015 9:33:00 PM Yeah, ya gotta laugh at yourself sometimes

Lin Lane Date: 12/14/2015 10:05:00 AM I love your humor in this one, John...congratulations. Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/14/2015 9:32:00 PM Thanks Lin

James Inman Date: 12/14/2015 9:32:00 AM Got a chuckle, John. Enjoyed. Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/9/2015 10:34:00 AM Lovely....I really enjoyed this. Thanks ever so much for your recent visit to my blog. It is so much appreciated. :) Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/9/2015 3:42:00 PM Eileen, always nice to hear from you, your presence in the soup adds to its "eclectic" flavor.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/8/2015 6:02:00 PM GREAT job with this one and a bit humorous. ME LIKES Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/9/2015 3:41:00 PM Yeah, I was going to call it an "Un-couplet"....

Tim Smith Date: 12/8/2015 5:08:00 PM Good one John...enjoyed Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/9/2015 3:40:00 PM Thanks Tim, a bit of terse humor