Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

Beyond the Rainbow

Rain drizzled softly beneath the rainbow.
With colours that shone so bright
Birds flew high above the arc
A mild zephyr blew so lightly.

How could I not admire the rainbow?
Shimmering silvery on clouds low.
From red, to yellow and onto violet
All colors twinkling in a magnificent tableau.

Silence spread, a hush, bright hues
Dreams spiced through watery drips
As colorful fairies flew hither and thither,
Till they disappeared in total eclipse.

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John Loving Iii May 15, 2026 at 1:51 PM The poetry of nature is one of those things that keep us inspired. This one inperticular.

sara Etgen-Baker May 3, 2026 at 5:04 PM captivating poem, Victor. Raining here today....sheets of rain, but I love it.

Kai Michael Neumann May 1, 2026 at 1:45 AM Beautiful. Sending you kind wishes, Kai

Ink Empress April 28, 2026 at 12:16 PM Dear victor, your rain poem is stunning. As i comment on this right now its raining so heavily here and theres a thunderstorm. I long to see a beautiful rainbow after this storm passes especially after reading your stunning poem. I absolutely love your imagery and how it flows in such calming cadence, Every line here speaks to me! And i see through your words! Especially the ending is so moving! Definitely a fave for me! Pleasure reading. Sending you light always

Joseph May April 27, 2026 at 7:44 PM A colorful scene, Very nicely penned,

Yann Rolland April 27, 2026 at 4:03 PM so creative and sensitive, thanks poet

Sotto Poet April 27, 2026 at 3:48 PM This is really wonderful and inventive. This poetry is ethereal and reminiscent of a surreal sensation. It was a very enjoyable line to finish with. Thanks for your concern

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 27, 2026 at 3:08 PM This poem is dreamlike and magically lovely. I really enjoyed the final line. This is a fave. :)

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2026 at 12:06 PM Very lovely. It's really cool to spot a double one

Darlene De Beaulieu April 27, 2026 at 11:51 AM Hello Victor, I enjoyed the poem. I love the rainbow. The colours are so beautiful. I often wonder which side is the end of the rainbow. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu April 30, 2026 at 10:48 AM Hello Victor, I reread this poem , and made it my fav. I hope your day is going well. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu April 28, 2026 at 11:06 AM Victor , i am making this poem my fav. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

I Am Anaya April 27, 2026 at 11:43 AM Victor, I too was thinking of rainbows, you've captured all I wanted to say. A lovely fantasy! Blessings

Daniel Henry Rodgers April 27, 2026 at 10:25 AM Hello Victor, it's like you caught the rainbow in that moment before it dissolves, colors trembling, birds stitching the air, the whole scene holding its breath. I like how the fairies slip in like a secret only the rain knows. The end is lovelty! Blessings, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds April 27, 2026 at 9:31 AM A rainbow after rain is an awesome sight, as your lovely poem says Victor, they never cease to amaze… Beryl

Judy Ball April 27, 2026 at 6:03 AM WoW Victor. This is lovely. As I read I could see the rainbow. Rainbows are very special to me. They speak to me of God's promise that better things are just around the corner .Be patient. God Bless, JB

Valsa George April 27, 2026 at 5:09 AM So beautiful is your description of the sky with an arching rainbow. I can visualize the scene. Your nature always teems with life and color!

Sara Kendrick April 27, 2026 at 4:34 AM I am delighted that you had some rain and saw a rainbow. They are so beautiful and always remind me of the Bible passage how God set the rainbow in the sky to remind us that he would never flood the whole earth again. Thank you for writing this one. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2026 at 3:27 AM Love the imagery and sweet fantasy! xx

Ghairo Daniels April 27, 2026 at 2:49 AM A beautiful capture of a beautiful phenomenon, Sir Poet. I love the light feel & colour of the poem. This is a good line : “ Dreams spiced through watery drips”. Keep well. Xx.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh April 27, 2026 at 1:29 AM Charming and illusive are the ways of nature - beautifully penned.

Tom Cunningham April 26, 2026 at 11:24 PM One of the wonders of creation, so beautiful to see. Tom