Beyond Rose Gardens

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Rose gardens buried beneath the snow, dormant, forgotten, still and cold. Shattered hope for restless young and old, they wait for a Spring that may never come. Bitter tears in anchored fears, the world’s a cruel and lonely place. Loved ones vanish without a trace, somewhere beyond rose gardens. Hearts that long to find their mate so in a twosome beat as one. Remember battles lost and won and other dreams worth their journey. Read on air by invitation ~ March 20, 2022 'POETS HARBOUR' AP: 1st place 2022 Submitted on March 14, 2022 for contest 'A BRIAN STRAND FORMED' sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on March 13, 2022

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Mike Bayles

Date: 3/21/2022 7:51:00 AM

This poem does a great job to convey a sense of longing that lives beyond the roses.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2022 2:35:00 PM

Thank you very much, Mike ~

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/16/2022 5:16:00 AM

"Loved ones vanish without a trace, somewhere beyond rose gardens"- Verses of deep reflection. The whole poem has great message to give. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/16/2022 7:23:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Christuraj ~

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2022 12:40:00 PM

beautiful in its sadness Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2022 9:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jan ~