Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Beyond Reach

Beckoned by love, allured by memories,
Embracing missives of delightful dream
Engrossed in sphere of halo mesmerizing
Surrounding her aura in ornate gold ring,
She lifted-off gaily into ethereal, heavenly,
Way beyond reign of mortal melancholy
That gripped her soul in unbearable grief.

Enthralled she floated on feelings angelic
As she swirled, danced on magical wings,
Visiting lustrous nebulae hanging mirthfully
Amid magenta clouds’ resplendent motifs;

A kingdom of happiness, of eternal paradise,
An escape to wonderland fit for a child,
Just like her mother had once described
Where love always blossoms garden of joy.

Flexing exuberance, she queried the stars,
Until she came upon the brightest of all,
And recognized the most reassuring smile
Peering fondly into mother’s loving eyes
Nesting in her breasts, savoring her breath,
Longing every touch, reveling every pulse,
Blissful in endearment of realm sublime
Reconnecting enamored memories divine
Cradled in mother’s arms till end of time.

December 27, 2022
Poem of the day on December 28, 2022
Placed 5th: Beyond Reach Premium Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Evelyn Judy Buehler May 23, 2023 at 12:23 PM I enjoyed every heartfelt line of this stirring masterpiece, Vijay. Congratulations on POTD. :)

Fin Chuuk February 17, 2023 at 8:46 PM Magnificent! Fave it :)

Katharine L. Sparrow January 29, 2023 at 7:16 PM A heavenly reunion here, tender and exquisitely described. Lovely piece that resounds through time. Well done.

Ann Foster January 10, 2023 at 8:43 AM Lovely... blissful in endearment... Excellent work. Ann

Sara Kendrick January 6, 2023 at 7:11 AM Back with congratulations on your win in the contest. Way to go with this excellent work. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler January 2, 2023 at 10:31 AM Soft, sweet, and beautifully written in your splendid style Vijay. :) Vijay Pandit January 2, 2023 at 1:38 PM Thank you Linda--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

P.S. Awtry January 2, 2023 at 9:36 AM Oh, Vijay this is beautiful. No wonder at its many honors! Many congratulations :) ~ps Vijay Pandit January 2, 2023 at 9:40 AM Glad you stopped by PS. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Susan Ashley January 2, 2023 at 9:19 AM Dear Vijay, it is my immense pleasure to return with a big congratulations for your exquisite poem being doubly honored with the distinction of POTD and with a wonderful placement on Rose's short list of contest winners. I knew this poem was especially special! Warmest wishes to you and yours for a happy and healthy new year, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit January 2, 2023 at 9:40 AM You are so very kind, dear Susan. Much appreciate your return visit and glowing remarks, my friend. I am looking forward to reading your next poem--another gem, I am sure. Wishing you the very best in 2023.

Mike Gentile January 2, 2023 at 6:20 AM Vijay, though late in praise as I've been away, I must tell you how beautiful your words are here! What cold want for more that an eternal existence . This one is just stunning!! A Happy New Year to you!!! Vijay Pandit January 2, 2023 at 9:37 AM Welcome back, Mike. I am sure you had a wonderful time being away. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks. Wishing you the very best in 2023.

Harry Horsman January 1, 2023 at 7:42 AM Great potd, Vijay. well deserved. Vijay Pandit January 2, 2023 at 9:36 AM Thank you Harry. Wishing you the very best in 2023.

Joseph P. DiMino December 31, 2022 at 11:58 AM Wow! Beautiful imagery, and that in itself makes this fine work worthy of POTD~ but here, also I relate to love profound and everlasting. The parting of a beautiful earth being, once again comforted, after much suffering, back in the protected, saintly arms of an equally blessed mother, in God's divine presence in heaven -- if I have this right. Magnificent, heart-felt poetry! I know what it is to lose someone so dear to my soul. Vijay Pandit January 2, 2023 at 9:35 AM The theme given was about a child contemplating--in my version, the child is missing her mother and finds her in heaven where she wishes to stay forever in mother's arms. Your comments are on mark, as always, my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Joe. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues December 31, 2022 at 11:34 AM Beautiful! Congratulations on POTD, Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 2, 2023 at 9:32 AM Thank you Kim. Much appreciate.

Beata Agustin December 31, 2022 at 4:55 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Vijay Pandit December 31, 2022 at 6:38 AM Thank you for the blessings, Beata. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Valsa George December 30, 2022 at 7:09 PM Back to congratulate you on your great win, Vijay. Have a joyful New Year of peace and prosperity! Vijay Pandit December 31, 2022 at 6:37 AM Wishing you the very best in 2023, Valsa. Much appreciate your return visit my friend. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands December 30, 2022 at 6:07 PM Congratulations for your win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit December 31, 2022 at 6:35 AM Much appreciate your return visit, Heidi. Many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith December 30, 2022 at 1:30 PM Back with Congratulations on this New win. Enjoyed it. Have a great weekend............... Vijay Pandit December 31, 2022 at 6:35 AM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2022 at 12:57 PM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - A beautiful poem - Thank you for friendship in the year 2022, Vijay ... wishing you a peaceful and blessed new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit December 29, 2022 at 3:27 PM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Anne-Lise. Thank you my friend for your support throughout. Wishing you a very happy 2023. Hugs to you as well.

Susan Lawrence December 29, 2022 at 11:33 AM Dear Vijay , Your eloquence of language and heart shine brightly and deeply in this gem ! A fav to be read and experienced again and again . I love it’s entirely and especially the last line . Belated congratulations on POTD ! Blessings, Susan :) Vijay Pandit December 29, 2022 at 3:24 PM Honored to receive your compliments and your FAVE, Susan. Much appreciate your insightful comments, my friend. Many thanks. Blessings to you as well and a very happy 2023.

Sotto Poet December 29, 2022 at 8:47 AM Outstanding and clearly deserving of the POTD Vijay, congratulations. You have created, in your own unique way, a poem of outstanding beauty that does the imagery completely in absolute beauty. Your command of the English language is unparalleled. My best wishes to you, my dear friend. This is in my Fave. Vijay Pandit December 29, 2022 at 3:22 PM You are so very kind my friend. Much appreciate your glowing remarks, Lasaad. Many thanks for your compliments and your FAVE.

Victor Buhagiar December 29, 2022 at 2:36 AM Terrific verse. Worthy of POTD. Vijay Pandit December 29, 2022 at 8:58 AM Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole December 28, 2022 at 6:34 PM "Reconnecting enamored memories, while being cradled in mother’s arms." Such a beautiful connection, so tender and spiritual. My first time reading your poem Vijay, and I see you've been awarded Poem of the Day. Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. Congratulations, my dear friend. My best to you, in the New Year. Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit December 29, 2022 at 8:58 AM Much delight, as always, to read your cheerful comments, my dear friend. Appreciate your presence on my page. Many thanks for your good wishes, Brandy. Hugs to you as well. Wishing you all the best in 2023.

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2022 at 4:30 PM wow, so beautiful. And I see it was a POTD. Congrats to you Vijay Pandit December 29, 2022 at 8:54 AM Glad you stopped by Andrea. Always enjoy your visit. Many thanks.

Suzanne Delaney December 28, 2022 at 9:35 AM Congratulations, Vijay: on your POTD honor. An uplifting and delightful piece. So many beautiful and affirming images. SuZ Vijay Pandit December 28, 2022 at 11:30 AM Thank you SuZ. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.

Valsa George December 28, 2022 at 8:00 AM Back to your poem with Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, dear Vijay ! Vijay Pandit December 28, 2022 at 11:30 AM Much appreciate your return visit, Valsa. Many thanks, my friend.

Joseph May December 28, 2022 at 7:37 AM Find her paradise in the brightest star, Congrats on POTD Vijay Vijay Pandit December 28, 2022 at 11:29 AM Yes--the brightest star was the one with familiar smile. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Joseph. Many thanks.

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