Beyond Her Reach

Immersed in poignant thoughts she stands
where water slides upon the beach.
She yearns for him, although she knows
that he is far beyond her reach.

She calls his name, but all in vain;
her voice drifts slowly out to sea.
It trails along the silver path
to depths wherein his soul rests free.

She often comes to the same spot
to keep alive within her heart 
the cherished dreams which once they shared,
a past from which she can’t depart.

The air turns cold. She draws her shawl
around her arms and shoulders bare.
The breeze reminds her of his hands 
when they caressed, ran through her hair. 

It’s getting late and with a sigh 
reluctantly she turns away
just as a lonely silhouette 
emerges from the moonlit bay.

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Contest: Five Rhyming Stanzas
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Placed 1st             (29/8/2016)

© 26th August 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hamilton Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Congrats Paul enjoyed the second read, this is just great!A7
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Thank you, John; kind of you to pay a repeat visit. Regards // paul
Richards Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:51 PM
This unrequited love poem, is so touching !! Well done, Paul !! A first for sure !!!
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thank you for reading and liking, Carrie. Your comments are always a source of encouragement:) Regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Lovely to see this one again - congrats on your win, Paul.
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 11:20 AM
A second visit is doubly appreciated, Agnes:) Thank you! Regards // paul
Scars Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 10:37 AM
So beautiful Paul, as always, you always know what I love...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Callus Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Thank you dear Laura:) Irrespective of classification, it's my pleasure participating in your contests. Warm regards // paul
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Paul, it's a wonderful account of a jilted love affair. This woman evidently draws sympathy of the readers.
Callus Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Sarban. Regards // paul
Hamilton Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Excellent write Paul I really enjoyed, the imagery of the longing for lost love. Congrats on a fine win!A7
Callus Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Many thanks, John...always a pleasure to have you stopping by. Regards // paul
Lindley Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:41 PM
THERE IS A FRAGILE BEAUTY IN LOVE LOST. You captured it in this fine painting my friend. Such depth and that closing says it all. Fav gem for me..
Callus Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Robert; your fav and delightful comments are truly appreciated, my friend. Hope you are keeping well. Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Oh Paul, this poem gave me chills with your mysterious ending. I see why this poem won first place. It has a haunting passion that feeds the heart with romance. I must fave this Paul. Congratulations on your top win. 7 ; )
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:55 PM
It always gives me pleasure to read your meaningful comments, Connie. Thank you; the high rating and the fav are truly appreciated. Goodnight. // paul
Hay Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Truly gifted, such dramatic visual, intense and heart warming too, well done, a 7 from me! another for my favourite. Warm regards, Laura
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Your lovely comments are also heart warming, Laura:) Thank you for the visit and high rating. Warm regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 3:27 PM
This is beautiful! Congrats on your win, Paul.
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:33 PM
I'm glad you found it to your liking, Agnes...thank you! Regards // paul
La France Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Paul, oh such a touching poem, just beautifully penned, congratulations in my contest ~
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:22 PM
I am pleased to see this poem placing high in your contest, Constance; so glad that you liked it. Thank you! Regards // paul
May Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Great write Paul...Congrats on your win
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Thank you, Joseph; pleased to see your entry on the winners' list. Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Love the flow of cool breeze you keep through the poem, Paul, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Eve. Your Barefoot Irish Lad was also a very worthy winner! Hugs // paul
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Lovely write Paul, a very deserving win...congratulations.
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Thank you, Charlie; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Hi Paul, You have penned a well written piece. The love that she still has for her is lover is so strong. What a beautiful heartfelt write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely feedback, Alexis:) I am so glad you liked this winning entry. ~ Regards // paul
Nance Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 5:24 PM
aww... a chilling sad story, very well told! hugs
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Thank you, Casarah; the sea at night tends to inspire such thoughts! Hugs // paul
Hagy Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Lovely and haunting write Paul...can I imagine that she turns back to meet the silhouette?...yeah I'm a hopeless romantic!:)
Lane Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Oh it's a goose bump write, Paul! 4th and 5th stanzas most of all. I love this one.
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Lin. A pleasure to have you stopping by. Regards // paul
Marie Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 10:13 AM
So beautiful Paul..the emotions are poignant and elegantly expressed. I often use the beach in my poetry so I feel especially touched by the beauty and sadness you have captured with such vivid imagery with your very fine writing. My best to you in the contest. A favourite..7+ blessings, lynn
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 2:06 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback and the fav, Lynn; you are too kind:) Blessings to you, too. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 9:41 AM
A terrific piece full of longing and not wanting to let go of the past. Loved the imagery Paul
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Thank you for the lovey feedback, Tim. All the best. // paul
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