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Beyond Her Reach

Immersed in poignant thoughts she stands where water slides upon the beach. She yearns for him, although she knows that he is far beyond her reach. She calls his name, but all in vain; her voice drifts slowly out to sea. It trails along the silver path to depths wherein his soul rests free. She often comes to the same spot to keep alive within her heart the cherished dreams which once they shared, a past from which she can’t depart. The air turns cold. She draws her shawl around her arms and shoulders bare. The breeze reminds her of his hands when they caressed, ran through her hair. It’s getting late and with a sigh reluctantly she turns away just as a lonely silhouette emerges from the moonlit bay. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Five Rhyming Stanzas Sponsor: Broken Wings Placed 1st (29/8/2016) © 26th August 2016

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Date: 10/24/2016 2:30:00 PM
Congrats Paul enjoyed the second read, this is just great!A7
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/25/2016 7:27:00 AM
Thank you, John; kind of you to pay a repeat visit. Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2016 7:51:00 PM
This unrequited love poem, is so touching !! Well done, Paul !! A first for sure !!!
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Date: 10/24/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for reading and liking, Carrie. Your comments are always a source of encouragement:) Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2016 7:46:00 PM
Lovely to see this one again - congrats on your win, Paul.
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Date: 10/24/2016 11:20:00 AM
A second visit is doubly appreciated, Agnes:) Thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2016 10:37:00 AM
So beautiful Paul, as always, you always know what I love...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2016 4:15:00 PM
Thank you dear Laura:) Irrespective of classification, it's my pleasure participating in your contests. Warm regards // paul
Date: 9/12/2016 10:22:00 AM
Paul, it's a wonderful account of a jilted love affair. This woman evidently draws sympathy of the readers.
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Date: 9/13/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Sarban. Regards // paul
Date: 9/6/2016 7:59:00 AM
Excellent write Paul I really enjoyed, the imagery of the longing for lost love. Congrats on a fine win!A7
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Date: 9/6/2016 11:58:00 AM
Many thanks, John...always a pleasure to have you stopping by. Regards // paul
Date: 9/4/2016 9:41:00 PM
THERE IS A FRAGILE BEAUTY IN LOVE LOST. You captured it in this fine painting my friend. Such depth and that closing says it all. Fav gem for me..
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Date: 9/6/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Robert; your fav and delightful comments are truly appreciated, my friend. Hope you are keeping well. Regards // paul
Date: 9/1/2016 3:59:00 PM
Oh Paul, this poem gave me chills with your mysterious ending. I see why this poem won first place. It has a haunting passion that feeds the heart with romance. I must fave this Paul. Congratulations on your top win. 7 ; )
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:55:00 PM
It always gives me pleasure to read your meaningful comments, Connie. Thank you; the high rating and the fav are truly appreciated. Goodnight. // paul
Date: 8/30/2016 5:41:00 PM
Truly gifted, such dramatic visual, intense and heart warming too, well done, a 7 from me! another for my favourite. Warm regards, Laura
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:43:00 PM
Your lovely comments are also heart warming, Laura:) Thank you for the visit and high rating. Warm regards // paul
Date: 8/30/2016 3:27:00 PM
This is beautiful! Congrats on your win, Paul.
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:33:00 PM
I'm glad you found it to your liking, Agnes...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 8/29/2016 4:30:00 PM
Paul, oh such a touching poem, just beautifully penned, congratulations in my contest ~
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:22:00 PM
I am pleased to see this poem placing high in your contest, Constance; so glad that you liked it. Thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 8/29/2016 3:41:00 PM
Great write Paul...Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph; pleased to see your entry on the winners' list. Regards // paul
Date: 8/29/2016 12:22:00 PM
Love the flow of cool breeze you keep through the poem, Paul, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Your Barefoot Irish Lad was also a very worthy winner! Hugs // paul
Date: 8/29/2016 12:06:00 PM
Lovely write Paul, a very deserving win...congratulations.
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:10:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul
Date: 8/29/2016 11:01:00 AM
Hi Paul, You have penned a well written piece. The love that she still has for her is lover is so strong. What a beautiful heartfelt write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 9/1/2016 2:56:00 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely feedback, Alexis:) I am so glad you liked this winning entry. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2016 5:24:00 PM
aww... a chilling sad story, very well told! hugs
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Date: 9/1/2016 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Casarah; the sea at night tends to inspire such thoughts! Hugs // paul
Date: 8/28/2016 3:44:00 PM
Lovely and haunting write Paul...can I imagine that she turns back to meet the silhouette?...yeah I'm a hopeless romantic!:)
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Date: 8/28/2016 11:45:00 AM
Oh it's a goose bump write, Paul! 4th and 5th stanzas most of all. I love this one.
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Date: 9/1/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Lin. A pleasure to have you stopping by. Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2016 10:13:00 AM
So beautiful Paul..the emotions are poignant and elegantly expressed. I often use the beach in my poetry so I feel especially touched by the beauty and sadness you have captured with such vivid imagery with your very fine writing. My best to you in the contest. A favourite..7+ blessings, lynn
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Date: 9/1/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback and the fav, Lynn; you are too kind:) Blessings to you, too. Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2016 9:41:00 AM
A terrific piece full of longing and not wanting to let go of the past. Loved the imagery Paul
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Date: 9/1/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you for the lovey feedback, Tim. All the best. // paul

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