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Bodies passionately intertwine, and at that moment, two hearts combine, creating feelings of ecstasy. The angelic sparkle in her eye twinkles like a star in the night sky, and your soul soars beyond flesh and bone. Swearing you will never be alone she punctuates each word with a moan, and the sensual sound of a sigh. You feel so sublime; it's frightening, but at the same time enlightening, soaring to heights beyond happiness. Your heart's filled with overwhelming bliss, you never knew love could feel like this as you melt into her waiting arms. (Tercets) 4/26/2017

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:03:00 PM
Beautiful. Superbly penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2017 4:58:00 PM
Yours is the most romantic so far. LOVE a great romantic poem like this , Emile. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/14/2017 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/13/2017 9:06:00 AM
So romantic and passionately written with an amazing flow of words, Emile. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2017 11:27:00 PM
One sizzling, hot read here, Emile! Well done, too! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2017 9:30:00 PM
wonderful words of romance and passion! Moving- I could feel each embrace in each word written. thank you for sharing and be blessed! ;)-luloo
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Luloo, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Emile.
Date: 4/28/2017 10:39:00 AM
There is a powerful flow in your lines Emile. Good luck in the contest:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/28/2017 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Marie, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 4/27/2017 11:46:00 AM
Beautiful one for the contest... Reads like a winner... Good luck with the contest...
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Date: 4/27/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Supraja, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/27/2017 8:32:00 AM
What a brilliant entry for the contest. Good luck A 7++
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Date: 4/27/2017 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Maria, your comments are welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.

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