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Beyond An Action

What is beyond an action that it develops traction to spread its just-effect in subtle ways we cannot detect ..... Be the action born from a moment or spun from an incident, time does take it as consent to later unfold it duly spent in same fashion as it was first lent ..... Thus we reap acts and words strangers sow as they form futures others will know - it was behaviors now gone and past that produced our current now as cast ..... ... CayCay September 29, 2018

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Date: 1/6/2019 7:30:00 PM
A super win for you CayCay! I am delighted to see this in First place! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/6/2019 5:22:00 PM
Very well said, CayCay, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 1/6/2019 4:40:00 PM
this is very thoughtful , meaning that it makes us refllect on how true your ideas are here, Caycay. Big congrats. I did not make it on the list this time. I think last time not either. Wish I could think of poems I have not aleady used in his hundreds of contests. haha!!
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Date: 1/6/2019 3:55:00 PM
Ditto Demetrios' comment. (Drop down). Perfectly conceived; flawlessly executed; profoundly penned. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Warm winter wishes, Gershon
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/6/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for such uplifting compliments that warm me, as per your winter wishes! If you're at all like me, all that Demetrios says is of great value. So glad you visited ... CayCay
Date: 9/29/2018 9:05:00 PM
'And the truth shall set you free'! Well conceived CayCay! I hope you are well? I struggled with trying to see and comment on poems over a week because of pop up ads, but I think they fixed it now. xxoo : )
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Date: 9/29/2018 10:48:00 AM
Yes, this is true. Well written! :)
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Date: 9/29/2018 10:40:00 AM
Lovely write my friend...for every action...there is an equal and opposite reaction... physics 101 lol...love & actions...^WW^
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Date: 9/29/2018 10:24:00 AM
Profound writing with hidden messages that those who know may understand! Wonderful dear, CayCay!
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Date: 9/29/2018 7:51:00 AM
So true...all is present in the now...Nice write CayCay...All the best...
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