Bewitching of the Falling Hours

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Bewitching of the falling hours, true ascendance found By this chance to rise, I have real transcendence found Your lips find a way to see me; two eyes make the voice No tears I shed, you're being seen; no disruptence found I'm stunned; are you a living form of ketamine? It can't be; you touched me, I am not convenience found Your eyes are the stars, hard to be lost, but lost; I am Sailing toward the view; we are their convergence found Hold no obligation, you repair this damaged heart You are flame eternal for me; no dissidence found

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/31/2023 12:19:00 PM

This great poem introduced me to the Ghazal style. It is well written and quite intricate. Thank you.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/31/2023 6:22:00 PM

I am happy it has exposed you to the form it was quite interesting to write. Taken about twice as long as I normally would need. Warmest Regards A.S.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2023 11:11:00 AM

I found the mention of ketamine so interesing. i got injections in a clinic to try to fix my nuerological problems. It did not work for me, but boy, what a trip i was on. This is beatiful love poem. Thanks for your kind words on my oldie poem that you read.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/31/2023 10:42:00 PM

You're quite welcome Andrea, it had been far too long since I paid you a visit and for that I apologize. As infinite as time is finding it is sometimes very difficult. Kindest regards A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 10/30/2023 6:28:00 PM

A truly beautiful poem of passion, A.S.! Your works really make me feel.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/30/2023 6:32:00 PM

A more fitting Ghazal then my emotion filled one of yesterday. Thank you for seeing the passion! Warmly A.S.