Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Bewitched By Beauty

i feel 
this flowing
like a fountain
you are judging me
on somebody else
but it's certainly 
not me

so i begin 
to draw 
for you
paint a picture 
of your beautiful face
this is so hard
to really explain
as you
mean so much
to me 
your sweet honey

i am soft 
deep inside
with a big heart
smiling at the world
but all i want to do
is be every thing
to your sweetheart

loving you 
was my breeze
feelings just 
keep floating
emotions leaves
fall unto 
your ground
gently touching
softly the heart singing

it shines out
glittering gold
you are beautiful
upon the crown
you are my jewel
queen of
enchanting oceans
its you baby
i want 
draped around
my neck

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Charmaine Chircop February 20, 2014 at 9:19 AM Its you baby I want draped around my neck-I really find this verse original and your poem utterly beautiful.

Eileen Manassian February 20, 2014 at 5:01 AM Liam, Liam, Liam...this is just.....beyond beautiful. I don't know what to write to give justice to what I feel for this write. Lovely....We all carry baggage, and it's hard not to carry that with us. This is a clarion call to see people not with tinted glasses, but with clear ones.

Robert Pettit February 19, 2014 at 4:27 PM Simple to read and understand as it was also very descriptive.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2014 at 4:22 PM - Romantic and beautiful as always, Liam!! - A pleasure to read! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)