Bewidering Autumn

Autumn has arrived
Blowing in as summer left
Coming with her best manners. 
Autumn can be mild
Or can change in a moment
From happiness to anger.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your win Joyce. Everything is changing so quickly at the moment here were I live but it is so breathtaking.
Horne Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 11:34 AM
yes, the season is very changeable indeed - lovely write, Joyce. So glad to see this was a winner. Hope you are well and having a lovely week, my friend xx
Onclaud Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 1:14 AM
love the poetic shift of mood, joyce.. cheers on your sparkling win.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Sweet one about Autumn, Joyce. Congrats for your win with this timely poem.
Gorelick Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Well done as usual. A big congrats on your big win. BG
Guzzi Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 3:55 PM
So true Joyce seems we are having an Indian Summer on the East Coast. Congrad's Light & Love
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:30 AM
I like how you let us feel different moods with this piece. Congrats.
Gibson Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:05 AM
So true; she is temperamental. Congrats.
Callus Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:11 AM
Autumn is beautiful in all its aspects, though the weather could be unpredictable at times. Enjoyed your write, Joyce....congratulations on your podium finish! // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 4:34 AM
Wow wonderful choka Joyce. Congrats on top win!
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 2:32 AM
dropping back with my congrats Joyce:-) hugs jan xx
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:54 AM
Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Joyce
Bauer Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 3:31 PM
so true, joyce, but i welcome her anyway! nice poem...
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:58 PM
I will take autumn any way she wants to present herself for there is beauty in a rain storm or in the sunlight shinning on the colorful leaves. I enjoyed your poem as autumn brings with it poetic inspiration for me and I see for you also. Blessings Joyce....Connie
Christensen Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:39 PM
:) Autumn sometimes comes with sharp teeth visible, sometimes. I love this little piece, great description of the whimsical fall.
Allison Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 6:38 PM
excellent descriptive write of Autumn weather Joyce. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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