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Beware the Tenderness

Beware the tenderness of anyone’s toes Especially that of your friends and foes, For pain, they say, is its own reward Can be magnified with additional woes. Carefully measure your daily deplored Consider exactly what you can afford, Wise to keep in mind the old, old saying A pen is mightier than the sharpest sword. Eschew the obnoxious mouthy braying Think about those words you are saying, Not easily embracing mundane compliance Your time better spent in earnest praying. Be skeptical of those who seek alliance For they have capacity to offer defiance, For your actions they do not think right When you are seeking a friendly reliance. Be aware, my friend, of every slight Keep both friends and enemies in sight, And walk your own paths in caution Especially when strolling in darkest night.
HONORABLE MENTION Revised and Edited May 14, 2022 submitted to "Rubaiyat Contest" Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet [a Rubaiyat has a specific rhyme scheme, but it does not require a specific line syllable count.]

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Date: 6/14/2022 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Friends that become enemies, I let go off. Some friends are not really friends. Have a great/blessed day......................
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/14/2022 12:22:00 PM
Ah, Paula, you are so on-target with your comment, and I want you to know that I always appreciate hearing from you.
Date: 6/13/2022 8:28:00 PM
"Keep both friends and enemies in sight" - Great! A beautifully written poem. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/13/2022 9:13:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. I really thought it would do better, but no problem.
Date: 6/13/2022 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Milt, you did a wonderful job in this poem.Your poem deserve better placement if the syllables count was respected. Even that no specific count is theorically required. Best regards
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/14/2022 12:22:00 PM
Soup Mail.
Date: 5/15/2022 5:01:00 PM
Marvelous contender for this contest Hank
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/15/2022 7:53:00 PM
Wow, thanks, Caren. I'm hopeful.
Date: 5/14/2022 7:23:00 PM
Great opening line. Be wise as a serpent and harmless as a dove. Well done.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/14/2022 8:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/14/2022 5:56:00 PM
Mature poem of a brain that exchanged the bitterness of knowledge for the understanding of the world as a place of passage. In just a few months I could see Milton progressing frankly towards mastery of writing and this fills me with joy and pride in his friendship. Continue this exemplary person who exudes sympathy and companionship!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/14/2022 6:28:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Marco. I have come to consider you a friend, as well, and I always am uplifted by your most insightful and thoughtful comments.

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