Between You and Me

Stuck alone I was on a large lift once.
And that was indeed long ago, quite long—  	
When the world was young, quite young, full of bounce.
I groped and groped in vain, whistling a song!

Groping in the dark for the alarm switch:			
All that I c’d wish for, all the while whistling,              	
What’d have lifted my spirits in the glitch,
Was my charming girlfriend—none intruding!
	
But that was not to be; no, not to be.
Now torn between discretion and passion,
I am sonneteering: Woe unto me?
No great loss, just a fleeting commotion! 

Well, I left the lift—left with self-pity.  
What a pity, though it all sounds witty!		  		


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/28/2017 1:33:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:35:00 AM
Interesting the thoughts that run through our minds when stuck in an uncomfortable situation. Nice write.
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, James, for your nice comments:)
Date: 9/27/2017 5:04:00 PM
Ram, love your fun sonnet, wonderful and congratulations on your win !
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Ram R. V.
Date: 9/27/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for your congratulatory message. I'm glad that you love it. I'm glad, again, that I lost it to you after all! Let me congratulate you, too.:)
Date: 8/27/2017 11:04:00 AM
I wonder, although the dry wit is very much present underlying I sense wistfulness for moments lost.
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