Between the Worlds

The koels’s shrilled song followed me As I turned towards the dark path In muted silent tones... The frogs croaked along The darkened flowers in misery Hung their tender necks~~ Only the ivy climbed This moonlit chateau As my soundless steps reached its ancient arch **The creaking door welcomed me in And there amid the silent shiny dust He waited for me to heal~~~~~~~ As his boring eyes entered my soul My bleeding wounds disappeared*** I followed him into the chamber Amid the stony effervescent ghosts The chateau a silent testimony To this union of the worlds... 16/09/2011 By Tahera Mannan For Constance’s “ Creepy, scary haunted house poem, please” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/25/2011 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart Constance's "A Creepy, Scary, Haunted House" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:21:00 AM
Very nicely written Tahera. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/23/2011 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, Tahera
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:16:00 AM
Hi Tahera- A wonderful entry for the contest...superb description as you walked up to the arch...u had me hanging on every word. Congrats to u. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/23/2011 12:40:00 AM
what a creepy union ans story, hin! ..grilling and really toasting, a topper!.. APPLAUSE to you for the superb win!...huggs
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Date: 9/23/2011 12:26:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on another awesome win with this haunting poetry my friend.. enjoy with luv.. u are so welcome ..my friend...
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Date: 9/22/2011 10:08:00 PM
Very scary and intriguing. congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 9/16/2011 4:24:00 PM
a chilling tale Tahera my friend.. a fantastic journey and adventure of frightening proportions luv.. good luck in the contest.. surely a chart topping piece luv..
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Date: 9/16/2011 2:47:00 PM
A captivating write here Tahera.Enjoyed reading it.Best wishes..
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