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Between the Rain Drops

The city is awash with water Rainclouds above are pouring down rain on the urban dwellers Between the drops there is humid air Pools of water form near the city sidewalks Cars pass by with windshield wipers beating out rythms Between the rain drops The heart of the city is beating Thousands make their way through the downpour Undeterred they make their way to their jobs and back again Between the raindrops A splash of hope be found Hope guides us through inclement weather in this magnificent city Between the raindrops Urban love persists Lovers meeet and embrace in this city which is so diverse It strengthens the soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/6/2019 2:22:00 PM
Beautifully penned piece.
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Date: 10/21/2019 2:57:00 PM
Excellent imagery between the rain drops..the picture flashes in front of the reader..great work, Matthew.
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Date: 10/20/2019 12:52:00 PM
- Even though it rains ... beautifully described, Matthew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/20/2019 10:32:00 AM
I love this, all of life going on during the rain. We take so much for granted but the world keeps turning, with or without us. Well done.
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Date: 10/19/2019 2:38:00 PM
Nicely done Mathew. Really good imagery and your love of the city shows in every line. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/18/2019 12:35:00 PM
Hello Matthew Anish, lovers will meet in any kind of weather. I like the rain drops.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/18/2019 9:50:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today. City life has so many offerings for the creative mind to pen some lines. Sara
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:40:00 AM
Your poetry strengthens my soul dear Matthew, Lovely poem, keep well and keep the faith . That's the only way to go
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Date: 10/17/2019 9:10:00 PM
another loving tribute to your city! Very nice, Matt. A few typos. YOu should check it over.
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