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4/6/2024 for No 1302 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

I sought the words for you, my lovely dear, To live in lines of melodious hue Especially chosen for eye and ear In hopes they’d ring so glorious, so true. I fear, my love, such words do not exist. These sentiments live outside the realm of words; Instead, these tender feelings do persist Between the lines, or in the songs of birds. In life, as in verse, does meaning not lie Outside visible lines of daily life Where things that matter do not meet the eye? So let’s pierce these lines with the sharpest knife. In the space betwixt when my heart will beat Someday, somewhere, between the lines we’ll meet.

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Date: 4/6/2024 4:37:00 PM
a well written and lovely love Sonnet. I appreciated the depth of your words, especially these: In life, as in verse, does meaning not lie Outside visible lines of daily life I agree. Sometimes I struggle finding the words....they exist betwixt the lines and words waiting to be heard. Great job. Am faving your poem. Have a great evening, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 4/7/2024 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Sara. I really appreciate your reading, and then beyond that, all the kind, complementary, and specific comments that you have made about my poems. It is very encouraging. I write a lot of goofy stuff, like the limerick, but it's especially nice to hear positive remarks when I try to be serious, which is a bit more difficult for me, but which is also rewarding to try.

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