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For Sonnet - Old  or New Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

I sought the words for you, my lovely dear, to live in lines of melodious hue, especially chosen for eye and ear, in hopes they’d ring so glorious, so true. I fear, my love, such words do not exist. These truths reside outside the realm of words. Instead, these tender feelings do persist between the lines, or in the songs of birds. In life, as in verse, does meaning not lie outside visible lines of daily life where things that matter do not meet the eye? So, let’s pierce these lines with the sharpest knife. In the space betwixt when my heart will beat, someday, somewhere, between the lines we’ll meet.

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Date: 1/9/2025 12:34:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem. Really lovely.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/9/2025 8:15:00 PM
Thanks Beau - glad you liked it!
Date: 1/6/2025 2:45:00 PM
My favorite among the winners so far. Congrats David.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/6/2025 3:12:00 PM
Why, thanks Rob!
Date: 1/6/2025 9:57:00 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
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David Crandall
Date: 1/6/2025 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Joseph!

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