Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Between the Evening and Daylight

As the sleepy 
daylight folds into night
Stardust embraces,
the cosmos in flight
Flowing neath cloud’s  
whispered sighs
provoking moonbeams 
in nighttime skies 
Held within my 
sweetest dreams 
I’ll carry you through 
this reality’s seams
Gazing upon the horizons 
so full of desire 
Again I’ll await the sun’s 
breathtaking fire
Simple simplicity of 
this universe’s kiss 
Traveling on those 
beams tireless bliss
In time the echos could 
no longer resist 
Visions of our love through 
a colorful mist 
My soul soars with your 
essence on sight 
Between the evening 
and bright sunlight

9/6/2020

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John Fleming August 1, 2025 at 3:14 PM Title drew me straight in. Glad it did. Not surprised in the slightest that you won first prize with this little beauty - a real gem! Way to go, Poetess...way to go. :) john

Richard Lamoureux September 11, 2020 at 6:43 AM I see this is a winning poem. I’m not surprised. Congrats Brenda. Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri September 22, 2020 at 6:46 AM Richard thank you for stopping by!:)

Paula Goldsmith September 7, 2020 at 3:35 PM Congratulations on your win. A "beautiful" write and picture. I love it when we have a full moon. (wow) I would love to have your pink moon picture. Have a wonderful day...................... Brenda Chiri September 7, 2020 at 4:30 PM Paula that’s so sweet of you to say! And yes I too would luv to see this moon in the sky! Thank you so much!:)

John Hamilton September 7, 2020 at 11:11 AM A beautiful romantic write, congrats Brenda on a well deserved win! Brenda Chiri September 7, 2020 at 4:29 PM John thank you so much! I appreciate your encouraging comment!:)

Susan Ashley September 7, 2020 at 9:32 AM Ah, my sissy, such sweet artistry shines in the delicacy of your romantic musings. Every line takes the imagination higher to a realm of where only dreams of love dare to soar. My apologies for being out of touch lately.. too much going on over here, my twin sis. I hope all is well and better where you are. Love and hugs always.. Illum <3 Susan Ashley September 7, 2020 at 5:54 PM The Unicorns have been dispatched and carry in their backpacks shakers of watermelon martinis. I’ll be over to the west wing as soon as I put out my fires here.. lol!! I miss my insane sissy!!! :)) I hope you’re feeling well.. coronavirus and kids out of school... yikes!! A double whammy in these crazy times! Brenda Chiri September 7, 2020 at 4:29 PM Ah my twin sissy! I have missed you! You see I have not been here that much either of late this damn coronavirus and no school for kids is about to drive me crazy than I already am! Lol! Quick send the unicorns to save me! Hahaha! Thank you so much!:)

Regina Mcintosh September 7, 2020 at 5:25 AM Wow. Such a incredibly beautiful piece of poetry. I enjoyed it so much and wish you many more amazing writes. God bless you sweet lady. With love and prayers, Gina Brenda Chiri September 7, 2020 at 4:27 PM Gina thank you! I appreciate that so much!:)

Gershon Wolf September 6, 2020 at 8:26 PM Celestial bliss, Brenda. A veritable treasure chest of gems and jewels. Each line soaring higher than ever. Very lovely penned. Bravo! Light and Joy, Gershon Brenda Chiri September 7, 2020 at 4:26 PM Gershon thank you so much my friend! :)

Joyce Johnson September 6, 2020 at 5:30 PM Beautifully said. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce Brenda Chiri September 6, 2020 at 5:32 PM Joyce thank you so much for stopping by!:)

Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2020 at 5:23 PM Such love in each line, well rhymed. Congrats on your fine win with this excellent poem. Brenda Chiri September 6, 2020 at 5:31 PM Thank you Jeanne I appreciate that!:)

Linda Alice Fowler September 6, 2020 at 4:48 PM Congratulations on the win Brenda! I enjoyed your line, "Simple simplicity of this universe’s kiss" and the last four lines of rhyme. Great imagery throughout! Brenda Chiri September 6, 2020 at 4:51 PM Kinda thank you so very much! :)

Bryan Norton September 6, 2020 at 4:30 PM Beautiful imagery. Wonderful poem. A well deserved placement. Take care. Brenda Chiri September 6, 2020 at 4:50 PM Bryan thank you much appreciated!:)

Arturo Michael September 6, 2020 at 11:57 AM A smooth sailing write...I sence freedom wngs... Brenda Chiri September 6, 2020 at 12:14 PM Ah Arturo thank you so much!:)

Rico Leffanta September 6, 2020 at 11:30 AM Well done! Aloha! Rico Brenda Chiri September 6, 2020 at 11:55 AM Rico thank you so much!;)