Between the Evening and Daylight

As the sleepy daylight folds into night Stardust embraces, the cosmos in flight Flowing neath cloud’s whispered sighs provoking moonbeams in nighttime skies Held within my sweetest dreams I’ll carry you through this reality’s seams Gazing upon the horizons so full of desire Again I’ll await the sun’s breathtaking fire Simple simplicity of this universe’s kiss Traveling on those beams tireless bliss In time the echos could no longer resist Visions of our love through a colorful mist My soul soars with your essence on sight Between the evening and bright sunlight
9/6/2020

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Date: 8/1/2025 3:14:00 PM
Title drew me straight in. Glad it did. Not surprised in the slightest that you won first prize with this little beauty - a real gem! Way to go, Poetess...way to go. :) john
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Date: 9/11/2020 6:43:00 AM
I see this is a winning poem. I’m not surprised. Congrats Brenda. Hugs Rick.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/22/2020 6:46:00 AM
Richard thank you for stopping by!:)
Date: 9/7/2020 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "beautiful" write and picture. I love it when we have a full moon. (wow) I would love to have your pink moon picture. Have a wonderful day......................
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2020 4:30:00 PM
Paula that’s so sweet of you to say! And yes I too would luv to see this moon in the sky! Thank you so much!:)
Date: 9/7/2020 11:11:00 AM
A beautiful romantic write, congrats Brenda on a well deserved win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2020 4:29:00 PM
John thank you so much! I appreciate your encouraging comment!:)
Date: 9/7/2020 9:32:00 AM
Ah, my sissy, such sweet artistry shines in the delicacy of your romantic musings. Every line takes the imagination higher to a realm of where only dreams of love dare to soar. My apologies for being out of touch lately.. too much going on over here, my twin sis. I hope all is well and better where you are. Love and hugs always.. Illum <3
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/7/2020 5:54:00 PM
The Unicorns have been dispatched and carry in their backpacks shakers of watermelon martinis. I’ll be over to the west wing as soon as I put out my fires here.. lol!! I miss my insane sissy!!! :)) I hope you’re feeling well.. coronavirus and kids out of school... yikes!! A double whammy in these crazy times!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2020 4:29:00 PM
Ah my twin sissy! I have missed you! You see I have not been here that much either of late this damn coronavirus and no school for kids is about to drive me crazy than I already am! Lol! Quick send the unicorns to save me! Hahaha! Thank you so much!:)
Date: 9/7/2020 5:25:00 AM
Wow. Such a incredibly beautiful piece of poetry. I enjoyed it so much and wish you many more amazing writes. God bless you sweet lady. With love and prayers, Gina
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2020 4:27:00 PM
Gina thank you! I appreciate that so much!:)
Date: 9/6/2020 8:26:00 PM
Celestial bliss, Brenda. A veritable treasure chest of gems and jewels. Each line soaring higher than ever. Very lovely penned. Bravo! Light and Joy, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2020 4:26:00 PM
Gershon thank you so much my friend! :)
Date: 9/6/2020 5:30:00 PM
Beautifully said. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2020 5:32:00 PM
Joyce thank you so much for stopping by!:)
Date: 9/6/2020 5:23:00 PM
Such love in each line, well rhymed. Congrats on your fine win with this excellent poem.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2020 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne I appreciate that!:)
Date: 9/6/2020 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Brenda! I enjoyed your line, "Simple simplicity of this universe’s kiss" and the last four lines of rhyme. Great imagery throughout!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2020 4:51:00 PM
Kinda thank you so very much! :)
Date: 9/6/2020 4:30:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Wonderful poem. A well deserved placement. Take care.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2020 4:50:00 PM
Bryan thank you much appreciated!:)
Date: 9/6/2020 11:57:00 AM
A smooth sailing write...I sence freedom wngs...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2020 12:14:00 PM
Ah Arturo thank you so much!:)
Date: 9/6/2020 11:30:00 AM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2020 11:55:00 AM
Rico thank you so much!;)
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