Notes About The Poem

* I had a friend who made this very sacrifice ... this is in his memory *

Between Storms

        Caught between two storms
            Payne's Gray painted hurricane
               A tempest that churns ... inward
                A girl waits, you see ...
               Hopes dangling on a new heart
            The perfect match thrums my chest

       I have filled life's cup ...
   Sipped of the sweet and bitter
 Stained welcomes with its nectar
Worked until weary ...
 Loved to depths and with passion
   Swum up souls like rivers, sweet

        Regrets? Yes ... and dreams
            But if 'twere mine once again
               I would surely live the same
                Still, I'm in no rush ...
               I've gazed the reaper's dim eyes
            Felt his keen breath on my neck

       I don't welcome him ...
   But there's a new life, precious
 A little cherub, dying ...
Let this storm take me
 One last swim in the cold brine
    One last gift ... for an angel.





~ 4th Place ~  in the "Fives And Sevens" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor.

(Syllables = 5, 7, 7, 5, 7, 7 ... counted at HowManySyllables.com)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kereopa Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Gregory, a fav for me.
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 5:35 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:18 PM
Congrats!! on your win my poetic bro...^WW^ :o)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 6:43 PM
This poem is sensitive and beautiful Greg. A life lesson filled with appreciation. Congratulations on your deserving win ! xxoo
May Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Into the misty unknown a storm brews..Very nicely penned Greg..Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 8:44 PM
brilliant,GREG!!!
Hamilton Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Another wonderful write G, your pen flows golden, this is a sure winner!
Andresen Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 8:30 AM
- An impressive Choka poem, so well written Gregory :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - I just made one verse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Barden Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Oh, that's so very sweet of you, Anne-Lise - thank you so much! The best and blessings to you as well, my friend! :o) <3
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