Between Shades

"Between Shades"
Somewhere between shades of midnight and sapphire lies the color black blue with specks of tiny white Such are stars waiting to grant wishes and offerings
whisper your desire
Peace on Earth comes to all seeking the sky of night standing before her with an ever clear and open mind Witness with freedom many stars that radiate through
believe your desire
Brief is this moment in time yet window of fantasies waiting for all to witness her aura of magnificence Up high she remains in gala shadows sparkling bright
fly your desire
Whether you take close the one you love by the hand or gently think of someone who is far away from home somewhere between shades lies a dream just for you
hold thought your desire
SkyWatcher - 06-01-17
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Vaso Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:27 AM
This for sure makes one desire................
Ricci Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 4:00 AM
Hello Arthur. Good Morning. I hope this day finds you well. Thank you very much. Your review is most generous. May the night sky be there for one and all. Enjoy the morning and day.
Ella Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Wishes from a starry night - this one is very thoughtful and inspirational <3 Love this, Lisa :)
Ricci Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 3:59 AM
Good Morning Sara. I'm sorry for the late response. Thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed the entry. May we all have a dream to stand before the night sky. Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you again.
Sathasivam Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Excellent. Such a beautiful and heartfelt write with well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Ricci Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 3:57 AM
Good Morning Ravi. Thank you very much. I'm sorry for the late response. I appreciate your generosity. May the night sky be there for one and all. Enjoy the morning and day.
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:36 PM
PS. I'm adding this to my fav's
Ricci Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Thank You Thank You. Good Evening White Wolf. I hope this night finds you well. I will be making my way to your page today.
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Lisa.... In my eyes, this is the best poem I have seen you produce! It contains every element needed! The title alone is poetic! And the poetic content is outstanding in every way! I'm so glad I didn't miss this one!
Ricci Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:08 AM
Oh my goodness White Wolf. Good Evening. I am speechless with such generosity. Never do I take your visits and reviews lightly. Honestly. Thank you also for mentioning the title because I enjoy titles too. Coming from you whom I respect as a poet and your work I am honored. I'm pleased you liked the entry. Have a wonderful night. And yes, I will see you on your page. Many thank yous from me.
Manassian Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 11:53 AM
What a delightful piece based on one of my favorite words, desire. This is an invitation to not let the ills of the world take away our dreams. Thank you for this beautiful encouraging piece.
Williams Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Beautiful representation Lisa, I can well associate the picture you have painted. Many a time when driving on the highway we have stopped at night to view the sky and stars as you have described it - where there are no other lights to dim them. Love your continued affirmation and intention of your expectation. Believe me - the Universe's mandate is to manifest a desire that is whispered out. May all your wishes come true...Maria
Ricci Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Good Afternoon Maria. Thank you very much. Your intake on the sky is lovely and I enjoyed reading it. Honestly. Never do I take your generosity lightly. Have a wonderful afternoon and yes keep enjoying the sky and all her glory.
Michaels Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:40 AM
Such a beautiful and heartfelt write, Lisa. Elegantly capturing that unique moment of transitioning colours as effectively as a photograph - viewed through the passionate poet's filter. Thank you for sharing - going on my faves list! All the best, John.
Ricci Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Good Morning John. Hi. It is I who thanks you. I'm pleased you liked the entry. Your generosity is never taken lightly. May we all have a dream within the stars and sky. I'm sorry I'm always behind. I will see you on your page. Have a wonderful morning and day.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:21 AM
First of all Lisa let me compliment you on choosing the perfect title for this poem. The way you have your lines laid out also adds to the understanding and beauty of your words. This is quite lovely Lisa! ; )
Ricci Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Good Morning Connie. I'm so sorry for this late response. I've been away from the computer. Saying thank you for such a review and feedback seems so small however Thank you Thank you especially for mentioning the title. I enjoy titles. I'm pleased you enjoyed the entry. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 12:15 AM
I appreciate intelligent writing, add romance and you got me! Well expressed.
Ricci Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 4:52 AM
Hello Richard. Oh my goodness. Thank you Thank you. I very much appreciate your generosity and commentary. Honestly. I do not take reviews lightly. I'm pleased you enjoyed the intake and I very much appreciate your intake. Enjoy the morning and day. I look forward to turning to your page.
White Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 3:33 AM
Oops, only see your poem now my friend! Such a wonderful poem that brings peace and lightness. A starry night, wherever you are, but preferably on the beach, holding hands,,,,
Ricci Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 4:25 AM
Hiya Darren. Thank you ever so much. I'll take that beach if you don't mind. May I say the same to you as well. Your review and words are beautiful Darren. Honestly. Have a wonderful afternoon. Stay well Mr. Penguin. I will see you on your page.
Coreggia Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Your poem elevates the soul, my friend, while warming up the heart. You gently take us by the hand to guide us in a realm where all the windows are flung open and the light of fantasy is streaming through . . . thank you for being such a wonderful guiding star :) Amitiés
Ricci Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 4:23 AM
Buon Giorno Anne-Marie. Ciao. It is I who says thank you to you. Thank you for such a beautiful and generous review. Honestly. You have enhanced the entry. Thank you for that as well. Its my hope you enjoyed this entry. May we all have a dream to wish hope and think. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. I will see you on your page.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 12:01 PM
lisa, I always hold on to my dreams.If I don't then i have nothing to look forward to. Right?
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 3:52 AM
Good Morning Darlene. I hope this day finds you well. Thank you for sharing your intake and commentary. You are right. And yes always hold on to you dreams. Thank you also for your generosity. Have a wonderful day.
Turner Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Nothing like dreaming among the stars with that special someone:) Nicely penned, Lisa.
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 3:50 AM
Good Morning Daniel. Thank you very much. And yes, you are so right. I appreciate such generosity. Have a wonderful day.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:20 AM
A very good offering of intellectual romanticism, Lisa. A rare combo to see in poetry. You are a mighty fine poetess indeed. I echo Chris's comments totally. Beautiful poetry, awe-inspiring images. A 10! Love and joy always, dear.
Ricci Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Good Morning Freddie. Wow. Thank you Thank you. Honestly. Its my hope that my work and I are deserving of this review to which I do not take lightly Freddie. I'm so honored. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you soon on your page.
Green Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Enchanting, mesmerizing and so much to touch the heart in this wonderful poetic offering. Your words have me gazing to a night sky, watching as constellations wander silently by as I think of one who is very special to me. What a gorgeous piece of writing Lisa. Your talent shines brightly in your poem.
Ricci Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Top of the morning to you Chris. Hi. How are you these days by the way. Fine I hope. Thank you ever so much for such a review to which I am honored. Thank you also for sharing your intake of the entry for always do I enjoy reading your commentary. Have a wonderful morning and day. Enjoy your Friday and weekend. Signed SkyWatcher. Sorry Chris I couldn't resist. With all sincerity have a wonderful day. -- s m i l e --
Muchuma  Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Wow I love your poem its well written...best regards
Ricci Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Hello Oliver. It is my turn to now say "wow" thank you very much. I'm pleased you enjoyed the entry. Never do I take generosity lightly. Have a wonderful day and I look forward to turning to your page.
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