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Between Fear and Hope

where my heart longs to be the distance feels so far from me I don't know what exactly it is, that I fear when there's nothing left to keep me here hard decisions keep me awake at night always feeling this pull towards a brighter light you found a way to open the door to my heart where I found you did belong from the start with each day, I can feel you slipping away tears at me, in a thousand different ways where my heart longs to be is with your spirit that keeps me free never will the light slip away with my spirit you'll always stay have no fear, as I have none concealed thoughts for what's to come from the other side, I'll connect with you for never have I touched a heart so true a sign I promise, your fear to break angel in your pocket - rainbow at daybreak as we make the most of what we have now in my afterlife we'll be closer somehow and happy my soul will always be to have found a friend who cares for me *Entry for Tracie's "Opposites Attract" collaboration contest First 12 lines by Sandra Stefanowich Second 12 lines by Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 1/30/2012 2:21:00 PM
Lovely touching work above [re:Jar verse..grizzly doesn't mean Bad..Poe was grizzly! I love Poe & you] Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 6:24:00 PM
what a great theme you guys undertook. I really enjoyed this one, CArolyn. Your ending full of promise is just wonderful Congrats to you and Alexa.
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Date: 1/14/2012 5:12:00 PM
Great depiction of fear and hope! congrats on your win :)
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Date: 1/14/2012 10:42:00 AM
Touching piece, dear Carolyn. I love your faith in continuance - my thinking also. To be conscious is a never ending condition. There is no eternal void. When I think of this, my life always becomes joyful. Love, daver
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Date: 1/13/2012 2:13:00 PM
Very inspiring and heartwarming collab that flowed so well, Carolyn & Alexa! I remember you talking about how Alexa is such a dear friend-- awesome that you two wrote together! Congrats on your win! :D
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Date: 1/13/2012 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your joint win x
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:44:00 AM
Carolyn and Alexa congrats on your win,,David
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:33:00 AM
A very emotional yet observational write, here Carolyn, i am thinking of you..
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:53:00 AM
Wow this is wrote as oneness. I see no break from one to the other. Oh my this surely must be top spot. Love and blessings to you both Carolyn & Alexa. ~Carol~
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Date: 1/9/2012 4:29:00 PM
Wonderful, awesome and wonderful write both of you! I enjoyed the two separate verses from the both of you...and you both are unique in style but very effective! I loved it! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:55:00 PM
excellent collab for the contest, I know where I would place this if I were judging, up near the top! this would be very suitable for the 'life and death' contest too...
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:51:00 PM
Applaus, applaus - as I wipe away the tears. Nicely done you two - now pass the tissues. Joe
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