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Between Earth and Sky

his seasons' pass, new reflections appear on time's still water as another ripple crosses carrying another leaf that fell in this silence, he contemplates the truth of life passing watching the ripples moving the leaf to its farewell revealing what lays between Earth and sky is understanding that he's mere blood and bones wrapped in skin filled with thoughts searching for reasons that may or may not exist to questions asked only to find his inevitability is where his thoughts and journey end 6/27/18 contest Eight lines of fate, When you wonder if it's too late

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Date: 7/22/2018 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/21/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Frederic.
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Date: 7/20/2018 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. An amazing write, wise. Well done!
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Date: 7/19/2018 2:26:00 PM
You take this poem to a whole new level and I enjoyed reading each and every line of this magnificent poem, many congratulations on your top win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:49:00 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:18:00 AM
You are so right, I think many can relate to this one.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 7/10/2018 11:12:00 AM
I too had a poem titled as yours; though it did not carry the depth of yours. You have such a beautiful spirit Frederic my friend.
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Date: 7/8/2018 4:58:00 PM
wow, you took it to a profound level. Love your take, Frederic!
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Date: 6/27/2018 2:11:00 PM
incredible show of time's sense of uncertainty, frederic...beautifully handled!.. huggs
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Date: 6/27/2018 1:50:00 PM
Frederic.. Deep and sober truth.. just when we are close of figuring it out our time is gone and given over to the rookie with no clue!
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