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Better Than This

let me absorb the teasing sensation of your incredible warmth
you lure me in so easily with your temptation,
and hold me captive, within your inspiring dedication
. . it is so hard to resist you . .
and i dare not even try
to end our sweet rendezvous
of such titillating magic
 -- because nothing is --
better than
this


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* Just a little scribble *
Form of poetry: 10 words to 1

~ still dreaming of warmth ~

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Running Wolves Date: 10/3/2020 8:29:00 PM Your words are so hot, they could set a petrified forest on fire... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/3/2020 9:01:00 PM That's hot. :) Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Robert. I am smiling. :) Brandy

Timothy Hicks Date: 5/6/2020 6:12:00 PM ... and it all boils down into a single point at the end: nothing better than this. I hope you keep the dream alive ... it needs constant fuel and attention to burn so bright. Always so humble in the outro: "just a little scribble" ... modesty is a virtue ... but to be aware of one's value and one can soar even higher. Keep sharing your "scribbles", my friend. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/6/2020 9:00:00 PM Indeed. Nothing is better than this. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you Timothy. I am also humbled. I am just scribbling thoughts from my heart. Such a wonderful thing to say to me. I appreciate you and your kindness. Your friendship. My best to you. :) Brandy

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/4/2020 6:51:00 AM The ten to one would not have dawned on me if you had not said it for I became mesmerized in your words. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/4/2020 8:38:00 PM So kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you Caren. :) Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 4/30/2020 10:07:00 AM Oh my my so sweet, so warm, so wonderfully charming, so breathtakingly awesome Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/30/2020 1:27:00 PM Such a sweet thing to say. I am blushing. Thank you Robert, for your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Lawrence Sharp Date: 4/22/2020 1:30:00 PM Charming and sensuous as ever, Belle, nice write. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/22/2020 1:41:00 PM Thank you Lawrence. :) Always longing for such moments. Those of incredible warmth and excitement. I smile when you call me Belle. :) Thank you for your kind words. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior Date: 4/22/2020 7:47:00 AM I love "titillating magic"...another fine scribble dear friend...hope you're keeping safe Brandy...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/22/2020 1:32:00 PM You are a Warrior with Wonderful Wings!! Of course you like magical moments. :) Thank you John. I appreciate you and your thoughts. I am doing well. I hope you are too. My best to you. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/21/2020 8:04:00 AM Sensual and tempting magic you pen with you poetic talent - a seductive, brilliant write Brandy well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/21/2020 8:09:00 PM Dear Jennifer, thank you for reading this little scribble of mine. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Ahhh, those sweet moments in the sparkling sun. :) Brandy

Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2020 4:56:00 AM Your metaphoric relationship with the sun is warm, romantic and sensual, Brandy. Definitely very hard to resist! ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/19/2020 12:55:00 PM :) I am not one to bathe like this in the sun, but I do love the way the sunshine brightens the mood. Moments can be very playful and sensual. Thank you Paul. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/18/2020 11:03:00 PM Shape poetry is so challenging for me, but you made this flow with ease - I like the idea of 10 words gradually reducing to one - very skillful write, Brandy! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/18/2020 11:11:00 PM So kind of you to say. Sometimes, poems like this can be challenging, but they are fun to create. Thank you Michelle. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May Date: 4/14/2020 7:33:00 PM The magic of sweet seduction, lovely write Brandy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/14/2020 7:47:00 PM Thank you Joseph. Magical moments softly caress the skin. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Eve Roper Date: 4/14/2020 4:34:00 PM A stunning write from 10 to 1 word. I cannot get better than the warmth. Lovely lady you words are always sweet, like honey to a bear. Hugs and stay safe Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/14/2020 7:45:00 PM Dear Eve, such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts bring a smile. "Sweet like honey" I like that. I appreciate you and your kind words. Thank you. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt Date: 4/13/2020 1:53:00 AM Enjoyed this brief dream of summer on a cold, housebound day. Hopefully by then the sun will be out and so will humanity. Enjoyed the shape of this poem and your sense of playfulness with words. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/13/2020 9:01:00 PM Yes, to live in these moments- again and again. So invigorating. Stimulating and exciting. Dreaming of such warmth. Thank you John. There is a touch of playfulness within. Of course. :) I appreciate your kind words, your support. :) Brandy

Rico Leffanta Date: 4/12/2020 2:46:00 PM Who could resist such a treat? Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/13/2020 8:52:00 PM "Nothing is better than this" Thank you Rico. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Silent One Date: 4/12/2020 1:58:00 PM Seems like an irresistible guy... Always enjoy your sensual poems... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/13/2020 3:45:00 PM Irresistible are the moments, like in the photo. :) Those other inviting moments too. Mmm.. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 4/12/2020 11:03:00 AM Just like the warmth of the sun that caresses the soul, so is the warmth of love... All my best to you B, happy Easter to you and your family. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/13/2020 3:43:00 PM Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you John. Your kind words bring a smile. :) There are many ways to enjoy magical moments. I hope you and your family had a nice Easter. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jc Hawkens Date: 4/12/2020 6:08:00 AM Evocatively scribed, lovely poem. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/13/2020 3:39:00 PM It is that time of year!! Spring is in the air. :) Playfulness. Thank you JC. I appreciate your thoughts. All is well here in my world. :) Brandy

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/11/2020 8:55:00 PM Luscious write, love the form! xomo Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/11/2020 9:17:00 PM Thank you Maureen. Just thinking of some warmer weather. A moment like this. A fun form this is, indeed. My best to you. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/11/2020 5:05:00 PM Charming, delightful sensation--words of tender love evoking romance. Enjoyed the tone of this delicate write, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/11/2020 7:53:00 PM Thank you Vijay! Your kind words and support, I truly appreciate. There is something alluring, about this time of year. :) Brandy