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A poet once tried to rhyme “turmeric”: he ate ten big jars, and then murmured “Ick!” His taste buds murdered, poor dear old Bernard bolted up three flights of stairs to be sick.

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Date: 8/21/2023 10:30:00 AM
Yeah, three bottles of turmeric could do that! LOL Congratulations Ben! :)
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Date: 8/18/2023 1:45:00 PM
Ben, cute and creative, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:15:00 PM
Too much thyme with rhythm and turmeric…ick..ick.ick..however a bit is good.
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Date: 8/5/2023 7:42:00 PM
Next time he tries to rhyme with a word that's absurd, he needs to make sure the bathroom is downstairs. Just sayin'. Cute and clever, are your words. Thanks for the smile, this evening. :) Brandy
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