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If people could read thoughts - we'd all be in trouble.

Girls have naughty thoughts, like boys, but we're better at hiding evidence.

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/17/2020 10:54:00 AM

It is rather obvious when teenage boys have knotty thoughts - especially when they were not thinking! . . . . .Aloha! Rico

Anais Vionet
Date: 11/18/2020 4:06:00 AM

it depends on what your thinking with =]

John Gondolf

Date: 11/17/2020 5:20:00 AM

This is very true, Anais. When a boy has a naughty thought a girl has the option of pursuing it and seeing where it leads or turning around and running as fast as she can; when a girl has a naughty thought a boy doesn't have a clue. I doubt if girls ever had naughty thoughts about me.

Anais Vionet
Date: 11/17/2020 9:17:00 AM

Ha! I'm sure THAT isn't true =P