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Betrayal: a Lover's Masquerade

I liked you at first glance, and hoped and prayed you'd feel the same, I dreamed of our romance - although I only knew your name. I wondered what you'd think, and shyly offered you a drink; you nodded with a wink - the start of something big, I knew. My heart sincere and true, I quickly fell in love with you. Alas, I took a chance, to find for you it was a game - heartbroken, at the brink, I cried; but you maintained, 'We're through.' written 29th November for Dear Heart Constance's Fragmented Rhyme contest

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Date: 12/4/2018 5:48:00 PM
I enjoyed reading , Jack, very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination and the very sad emotions . Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/3/2018 4:38:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest, well done ~
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Date: 11/29/2018 9:40:00 AM
I have often declared that 'love' is a gamble, Jack! Either you win or you lose...but one has to first buy a ticket to stand a chance of finding out! Regards // paul
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